Heartache

jasmine wafts in air dance in scarlet shadows too … deep snow in psyche ___________________________ 15/02/2017

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Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2017 1:58:00 PM

Probir congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice write

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2017 11:13:00 PM

Thank you very much ... a pleasure to join in and be placed too ... your topic allured me ...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/18/2017 8:39:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Probir, love that last line. Congrats on your placement.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2017 11:18:00 PM

Thank you ... Your 'Hidden' has been lovelier ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/16/2017 10:38:00 AM

Btw, not much snow in Michigan this winter. It's been pretty mild and once we clear February, we should be home free heading into spring. Love this poem though. Love and more love, brother.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2017 11:34:00 PM

Thank you so much ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/16/2017 10:36:00 AM

Lovely poem, Probir. As always, you illuminate our senses w/elegant images. Beautiful poetry, my friend. Love always.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2017 11:35:00 PM

Thanks ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/16/2017 5:31:00 AM

Being a gardener, having jasmine in my garden and possessing a psyche (Greek word, you seem to like them) I can easily say, extraordinary dear Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/16/2017 9:36:00 AM

Some snow is melting ! ... Thank you ...

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/15/2017 3:13:00 PM

I read this about five times before I read the title and finally understood it's meaning. Well done Probir...

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2017 7:32:00 PM

Thank you so much ...

Chris Green

Date: 2/15/2017 9:42:00 AM

I know this feeling my friend. Nicely expressed.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2017 9:46:00 AM

Thank you ...