Heartache

jasmine wafts in air
dance  in scarlet shadows too …
deep snow in psyche 
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15/02/2017

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Date: 2/18/2017 1:58:00 PM
Probir congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice write
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/18/2017 11:13:00 PM
Thank you very much ... a pleasure to join in and be placed too ... your topic allured me ...
Date: 2/18/2017 8:39:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Probir, love that last line. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:18:00 PM
Thank you ... Your 'Hidden' has been lovelier ...
Date: 2/16/2017 10:38:00 AM
Btw, not much snow in Michigan this winter. It's been pretty mild and once we clear February, we should be home free heading into spring. Love this poem though. Love and more love, brother.
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:34:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 2/16/2017 10:36:00 AM
Lovely poem, Probir. As always, you illuminate our senses w/elegant images. Beautiful poetry, my friend. Love always.
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:35:00 PM
Thanks ...
Date: 2/16/2017 5:31:00 AM
Being a gardener, having jasmine in my garden and possessing a psyche (Greek word, you seem to like them) I can easily say, extraordinary dear Probir!
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Date: 2/16/2017 9:36:00 AM
Some snow is melting ! ... Thank you ...
Date: 2/15/2017 3:13:00 PM
I read this about five times before I read the title and finally understood it's meaning. Well done Probir...
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 2/15/2017 9:42:00 AM
I know this feeling my friend. Nicely expressed.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thank you ...
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