Heart Washed Ashore

Heart Washed Ashore “The sun of my reason has set. My thoughts have set sail and My heart was washed ashore last night. Take me to the bottom of the ocean. There, I will build you a sandcastle.” I asked you to bring me something from your memories. You brought me all the stars in the Universe; You brought me their gleam, their glimmer. And I, I stood there consumed by their warmth. In that moment, I realized that you will always love me more. I waited for the dewdrop to come home; But you painted for me dark blue skies and thunder. The clouds brought me to you and I stayed; I stayed Because there was no part of me that hadn't felt the rain. In that moment, I realized you were my comfort; my ease. I stretched out my hand to touch that petal. And you flooded me with peaches and flowers, You made me believe in Orange trees and destinies; I watched our euphoria take over my dreams. In that moment, I realized that you were my escape. I let myself fall asleep on your lap and heard our time tick away. I guessed correctly then, that Time would be our antagonist. And I must say, she played it quite well. I couldn’t feel the scent of your laughter anymore. In that moment, I realized that I had already lost you. I'm sorry I let my mind strike those words out; I hadn't realized that they were stories from another world; I hadn't realized that I was erasing your dream. I'm sorry I didn't even feel the heat of your fire; I was so consumed in mine. Think of happy places, happy people; they said. But in all my thoughts, I saw myself with you. You are my happiness. The period I refused to place. You are the ink-spot that refused to wash off. Come be my snowfall again; I promise I won’t hurt the flakes. Our yesterdays were so beautiful. Oh yes, they were! They've held most of our smiles and best of our memories. Frightened at the sight of our dreams coming true I don't want our tomorrows to meet. So hold my hand one last time and wish me a Good Life. Let our destinies lay buried under the shade of our Orange Tree.
18 October 2016 Words Drowned In Tears Poetry Contest
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U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 10:34 PM
A second chance is what we often hope for...it is SO beautifully expressed! Congrats. :)
Smith Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 10:41 AM
A warm and wonderful creation, congratulations Neethu...
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February 17, 2017 at 8:21 AM
Congrats on your win, Neethu.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem! :)
Negron Flores Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:08 PM
Congratulations Neethu on the placement of the contest.
La France Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest beautifully penned. Soup mail.
Kimathi Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Congrats Neethu, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
White Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 1:37 AM
Congratulations with your placement. Beautiful poem.
Nayak Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 11:53 PM
Congratulations on your win dear Neethu, this is awesome! ....Come be my snowfall again; I promise I won’t hurt the flakes...loved this line//love, Anu:)
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Neethu, congratulations on your win : ) Hugs Eve
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 6:29 PM
very good write, Neethu , congratulations on your win:) Hugs Eve
A   Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:43 PM
NEETHU, CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome Happiness Of Life win... Luv LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Neethu..
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Neethu, your poem gripped my senses and is so beautifully written that it choked me up with tears! What a great talent you have to induce such passion in the reader! This poem is so impressive, I would have had it at the top. Congratulations my friend! This is going into my faves! #7 ; )
Devnath  Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Negron Flores Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Congratulations Neethu on the placement of the contest
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Neethu, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 7:40 PM
NEETHU, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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