Heart Rhymes

Two hearts of lovers that beat as one,
                 Ignite each soul while kissing under the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 11:09 PM
Lovely sweet kilig write... :D weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!, :) olive eloisa here.. :) God bless Aiyah.. :) San ka sa Pinas.. :D?
Torres Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 7:35 AM
Hi olive.. my baby.. I live in Q.C.. how 'bout you?.. :)) Thanks for dropping by... 0x0x
Street Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 1:37 PM
It's Very Beautiful! As Being Cast Amid Love's Perpetual Bliss This Moment, Her Kiss....Piercing Their Soul Where In True Beauty Shall Reside ~ Perfect, Of Favourites, Your 'Hearts Rhyme'...Love, Jeremy
Torres Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Hey Jeremy!! what a surprised!!! I didn't expect this.. Thanks a lot!!! :O))))
Tacito Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Two words: Sun Block. :) This was touching!
Torres Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 2:56 PM
haha... I love that!!! ...kiss for the summer!!! :O)) Thanks ,Drake!! ^_^
Manassian Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 4:31 AM
Hmmmmmm....lovely and sweet. A great treat! Hugs
Torres Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 7:20 AM
hehe... thanks Eilee... :O))
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 5:45 PM
beautiful message!!!
Torres Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 7:24 AM
THaNKS A Lot ,Andrea!! :O)
Callus Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Very romantic AiyaH :) It's great how much can be said in just 2 lines!! lovely! // paul
Torres Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 7:25 AM
wew! ..thanks Paul...!! What a compliment!! :O)
Onclaud Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 4:20 PM
ahhhh, the height of romance, aiyah... splendid couplet!.. huggs
Torres Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 7:26 AM
hey hey hey nette.... this is great !!! love your comment dear.. Thanks a lot!!! :O))
Andresen Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 3:30 PM
- SO SWEET !!!!! - LOVE IT !!! - <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 3:46 PM
he he.. Thank you so much, Anne!! :O))
Smith Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 3:04 PM
How romantic... I love it....hugs Tim
Torres Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 3:08 PM
wish they wont burn.. hehe... thanks Tim!! oxox
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