Heart Prison

Unprison your heart From invisible chains by Opening the lock That restrains and oppresses You as an unseen fortress Nayda Ivette 1-7-2016

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Lin Lane

Date: 1/8/2016 4:34:00 AM

Well done, Nayda. It's not easy to open a heart once it's been broken.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/8/2016 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Lin. Hugs, Nayda.

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/7/2016 9:43:00 PM

A heart should not be locked up...some have locked their heart up for protection, others for reasons unknown. Everyone is unique and are not keyed the same. My heart was a fortress at one time so I know how that feels; it's a pause in life. May your heart never become a fortress. Thank you for sharing :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/7/2016 9:47:00 PM

Thank you very much for your feedback Edward.