Heart Murmurs

silence suffuses stillness with bliss as soul’s pristine presence pulsates

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Date: 7/16/2023 5:33:00 AM

Nice monoku, Congratulations on your win ... Unseeking.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/16/2023 7:52:00 PM

Date: 7/16/2023 12:25:00 AM

Lovely monoku with fine alliteration. Congratulations and thank you for participating. Blessings.^___^JCB

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/16/2023 7:52:00 PM

Thank you, JCB

Date: 7/15/2023 12:50:00 AM

Beautiful alliteration and a fine monoku. Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/15/2023 4:25:00 AM

Thank you, Chris :)

Date: 7/7/2023 10:42:00 PM

Great Monoku enhance with splendid alliteration.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/8/2023 10:11:00 AM

Date: 7/7/2023 11:46:00 AM

I am amazed at your brilliance and thoughts, Where do you get such insights?

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/7/2023 5:51:00 PM

I remain still and allow the universe to speak (we both can’t talk at the same time!)

Date: 7/7/2023 7:46:00 AM

- Lovely line :) - GL in the contest, U.S. :) - hugs

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/7/2023 5:51:00 PM

Thank you, dear Anne Lise! Hope you are doing well