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Heart Is a Paradise

Where burgundy pansies blossom Amidst pearlescent violet-weeds, Whirling medieval rose's ode, In moon's lachrymose memories.

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/5/2023 7:21:00 AM

Such lovely imagery in a short poem, Hiya. Thanks for sharing your poetic talent with us, my friend. Have a peaceful day. Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2023 7:06:00 AM

beautiful!

Silent One

Date: 8/28/2023 10:25:00 AM

Your poem made perfect sense to me and I don't think you used any difficult words..always try true to yourself and how you want to write poetry to express how you feel...that's the beauty of poetry...your poem is full.of imagery and your short verse is very poetic..

Valsa George

Date: 8/27/2023 8:15:00 PM

Your coinages of words are so unique and unmatched Hiya ! I like to imagine heart as a Paradise where burgandy pansies grow, where even weeds have an enchating shade and where memories sleep. Simply beautiful.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2023 8:04:00 PM

Wow! No ideas on how this is supposed to work, but it sure is pretty!!! ~ Heart's Aflame

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/27/2023 12:07:00 PM

Simply gorgeous Hiya as always. More poetic genius. Love the title too. Words just flows so majestically from you and captivates. Blessings to you - creative one.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/27/2023 11:03:00 AM

My friend this is awesome poetry . The kind only a rare golden pen can ink. Iwas awestruck by the beauty and power of this magnificent piece. You verses soared into my brain and totally amazed it. A great pleasure to read! A fav,. God bless..

Jay Narain

Date: 8/27/2023 9:47:00 AM

Hi. It takes me lots of dictionary search to understand your poem. Here is a simple translation, which I and many of us can understand better, Burgundy pansies in a field so wide, Among violet-weeds that softly hide. Medieval rose spins a tale so old, Moon's tears remember stories untold. Hope to see some simple poems in future. Thanks.

Jay Narain

Date: 8/27/2023 7:55:00 AM

Wow, Superb poem.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/27/2023 7:02:00 AM

Your poem is profound, revealing a paradise within a heart that is both kind and benevolent, even though it exists amidst a tangled web of weeds. The depiction of this heart's paradise is vivid and vibrant, showcasing its brilliance. Your talent for crafting such a beautifully eloquent scene with such brevity is truly remarkable.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/27/2023 6:13:00 AM

A kind, benevolent heart can indeed be a paradise, despite beating amidst weeds.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/27/2023 5:41:00 AM

Heart's paradise brilliantly blossoms in this succinct depiction. Your pen always shines, Hiya.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2023 4:45:00 AM

Very descriptive short lines. Pansies versus weeds we know who wins this one. Thanks for sharing this very creative one with us. Sara

Curie Stark

Date: 8/27/2023 2:17:00 AM

Beautiful visuals

Ink Empress

Date: 8/27/2023 1:39:00 AM

How gorgeous is this cube angelic star, i love the wordplay and colors used here and ofcourse heart is a paradise where burgundy pansies bloom, amidst everything else in life that gets in the way.. i also love “ pearlescent violet weeds” and moons lachrymose memories” ahh soulful and creative , flows seamlessly really: absolutely love this one and wish you all the best for the contest. Always keep shining

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/27/2023 1:22:00 AM

Perfect for the cube contest Hiya, Its really lovely. BOL & best wishes from SV

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/27/2023 12:50:00 AM

Lovely. God bless you kind heart, Love to you, Gina