Heart-Shaped Pillow

a villanelle


Who has fallen in love with the couch?
Who remembers the days of sweet romance?
Maybe Miss Piggy and Oscar the Grouch.

Hub spends much time napping, as I can vouch, 
more than with me.  A date night?  fat chance.
Who has fallen in love with the couch?

I think he loves me;  if I ask, it’s ouch - 
he cannot believe I’d ask in askance.
Yes, I’m Miss Piggy; he’s Oscar the Grouch.

I spend much time nagging him not to slouch.
In public, we smile, hold hands, and dance,
but he’s fallen in love with the couch.

There’s a secret valentine at our house
this February; I know in advance.
Gift for Miss Piggy "from" Oscar the Grouch.

A heart-shaped pillow, a kind of a pouch
to hold my dreams as he snores in a trance.
Now who has fallen in love with the couch?
Miss Piggy who loves her Oscar the Grouch. 


written 5 February 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/13/2017 10:36:00 AM
yeah! So much silliness in my heart this morning! thank you for the chuckles :) congrats! :)-luloo
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Date: 2/13/2017 10:34:00 AM
Ha ha, this is fun. Congrats!
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:02:00 AM
Valentine Villanelles almost sweet as apple jelly now read on winners’ page..You are quite the sage..Sweet Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/24/2016 6:06:00 PM
I really enjoyed this write Reason. Congratulations on your top win in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:51:00 PM
Haha... very enjoyable read. Loved it.Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:23:00 PM
Ah this is so lovely Reason.. no wonder a top podium.. big congrats.
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Date: 2/23/2016 4:07:00 PM
Reason, Congratulations on your "Valentine's Villanelle Challenge" have a nice day. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/23/2016 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest
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Date: 2/24/2016 9:08:00 PM
I thank you very much, Nayda. I welcome the placement and am pleased that you considered it worthy.
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