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My past a mixed brew grilled by time scarred by an ardor with an expiry date curdling bone liver heart dry as refrigerated omellete a breakfast for one, and later tea stale in stab of youtube replays because we are bleeding, leaving mocked by reality which once glued our hours together, and now a story absolutely pulp fiction, hard boiled to a numb indifference, although I miss those rugged jeans scratching gym- stroked thighs as we fight again again about the difference between and time and love while our room screams of my heartbreaking chains released...at last 2/11/2017 Nicola Bryne’s You Broke My Heart Contest

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Date: 2/16/2017 5:39:00 PM
Nette!! You are so wonderfully gifted!! Well done and congratulations!!! Big Hugggs deb:)
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Date: 2/15/2017 12:14:00 AM
What a poetic way to describe heart-breaking pain! Amazing, Nette:) congratulations:)
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Date: 2/14/2017 10:59:00 AM
Back with congratulations...
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Date: 2/14/2017 1:57:00 AM
Passion and insight, this is a very food poem. The migrant breeze of time and hollow whispers. Congratulation, Kai
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Date: 2/13/2017 5:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. What a marvelous poem full of great images.
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Date: 2/13/2017 4:46:00 PM
Poetic perfection. Congratulations. Well deserved placement.
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Date: 2/13/2017 3:39:00 PM
"Needles upon chest." Vivid painful imagery of a young love lost. Congratulations on your high placement.
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Date: 2/12/2017 1:23:00 AM
Beautifully crafted, Nette. Thank you for sharing. -- Wesley C.
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Date: 2/11/2017 7:28:00 PM
Nette - wow, what a great poem!! : )
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Date: 2/11/2017 1:52:00 PM
- Young hearts are very vulnerable ... her life is just starting ... - A wonderful poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2017 12:50:00 PM
So well written Nette, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 2/11/2017 11:20:00 AM
Haunting emotions, at least as i read, and captured with such impact. You start and end this exceptional poem with an air of nostalgia---darn unforgettable!
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Date: 2/11/2017 11:17:00 AM
Haunting emotions, at least as i read, and captured with such impact. You start and end this exceptional poem with an air of nostalgia---darn unforgettable!
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Date: 2/11/2017 10:17:00 AM
Poignant writing that expresses so vividly the aches of love at nineteen! She will have many chances to find her true love! Excellent! A seven dear, nette! Good luck!
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