Hearing a Rockabye

I wonder how the luster of evening, could hush despair amidst its glow, but, its touch upon this skin escapes me as the light reflects a child's face, gone: Through nightfall's sail, eyes weep in private while the rain flows intermittently, it spills...like dying stars along the roadside until this body is drenched in cold yearning. Within gloss of dew, cotton candy days are recalled enshrining laughter on Barnum Bailey fairs- then, jelly-smudges circle her girlish mouth, a wiggle on a red bike's new handle zigzagging away where flavors of revelry linger, still...still. And now, dusk creates another empty place inside more holes in a pinpoint of ebon clouds, that I am left alone without a voice... choked by reality's pinch when early dawn trickles in beats--- and singing myself to slumber no one hears a Rockabye's wail, except... Written 9/14/2018 ------------------ Shush, Did You Hear That: Anthony Slausen's Contest

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Date: 9/23/2018 11:14:00 PM
Beautiful, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/22/2018 11:18:00 AM
Awesome write, Nette, Congratulations on your win...Huggs Charlie
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Date: 9/21/2018 7:43:00 PM
Oh my........ that last line just gave me chills. What a lovely, melancholy poem this is ! Another winner in my book, Nette!
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Date: 9/14/2018 9:05:00 PM
Except for...Sometimes nothing seems to help...Enjoyed reading you...All the best nette...
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:45:00 AM
Awesome job with the lonely lullaby, Nette:)
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:03:00 AM
Wow Nette, this was powerful and filled with deep sadness of loss. I loved how you took us through this scene, painting such a picture of beauty as is a child's smile only to tear it away in the end, leaving us frowning. This was fantastic.
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Date: 9/14/2018 6:22:00 AM
Shush!...a winning poem cometh...excellent write my friend...sure to win...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/14/2018 12:39:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Nette, by any chance were you the little girl on the red bike ?. Tom
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