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Hearing

Heady sounds that make one curl inwards like a snail within its shell
Achy grating noises like a fingernail scratching across a chalk board 
Every velvet ear deserves sounds of the ocean and water falls  
Retire to your room, let the music ooze and fill your stratosphere 
I for one never enjoyed the cacophony of a thunderous world at large  
Naked ears can be trained to listen to so many Nature resounding peals.  So,   
Give thanks for your ears and all that they do, take care of them.

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Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/16/2023 2:04:00 AM So heartfelt a poem. We are often distracted by the cacophony of the world at large. Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/15/2023 11:37:00 PM Lovely poetry, some even with hearing aids, seem to not really hear at all what the other is saying, which is sad. Login to Reply

Tom Woody Date: 9/15/2023 3:39:00 PM Nice acrostic Rose. I fitted hearing aids for ten years. Hearing loss is a major disability and good hearing not to be taken for granted Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 9/15/2023 1:13:00 PM An excellent acrostic my friend. I did not receive your email. Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 9/15/2023 10:07:00 AM "Every velvet ear deserves sounds of the ocean and water falls" -- our birthright. Lovely, positive message poetically delivered. God the return address. Well listened to. Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 9/14/2023 7:34:00 AM Oh woww, such an intriguing and profound take for the contest, the way you've described about the different stimuli upon hearing myriad tunes of truths and certain aching symphonies of life whilst on the other hand also being soothed by the healing aura of the nature... This combination truly oscillates in the most impeccable way! A breathtaking acrostic poem.. Heartiest congratulations on the win :) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/14/2023 2:50:00 AM - Congratulations, Vie Rose :) - Give thanks for your ears and all that they do ... so true :) - hugs Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 9/14/2023 2:42:00 AM I love this acrostic, so beautiful and creative how you’ve phrased your thoughts and how you’ve used words that go with hearing: profound truths, so well articulated. Well deserved win: congratulations Login to Reply

The Situation Date: 9/13/2023 7:06:00 PM True, so true on so many leverl as mintioned here. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/13/2023 7:22:00 PM Thanks for the appreciative comment T S

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/13/2023 2:01:00 PM Congratulations on your winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/13/2023 7:21:00 PM Thank you Sara

Yann Rolland Date: 9/12/2023 4:07:00 PM we have to educate our ears, and solacing our lives, as much as we can, thanks Rose for the enjoyable and teachng poem , willread it again Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/13/2023 7:21:00 PM thanks for reading dear Yann :)