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Heady sounds that make one curl inwards like a snail within its shell Achy grating noises like a fingernail scratching across a chalk board Every velvet ear deserves sounds of the ocean and water falls Retire to your room, let the music ooze and fill your stratosphere I for one never enjoyed the cacophony of a thunderous world at large Naked ears can be trained to listen to so many Nature resounding peals. So, Give thanks for your ears and all that they do, take care of them.

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Date: 9/16/2023 2:04:00 AM
So heartfelt a poem. We are often distracted by the cacophony of the world at large.
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Date: 9/15/2023 11:37:00 PM
Lovely poetry, some even with hearing aids, seem to not really hear at all what the other is saying, which is sad.
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Date: 9/15/2023 3:39:00 PM
Nice acrostic Rose. I fitted hearing aids for ten years. Hearing loss is a major disability and good hearing not to be taken for granted
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Date: 9/15/2023 1:13:00 PM
An excellent acrostic my friend. I did not receive your email.
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Date: 9/15/2023 10:07:00 AM
"Every velvet ear deserves sounds of the ocean and water falls" -- our birthright. Lovely, positive message poetically delivered. God the return address. Well listened to.
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Date: 9/14/2023 7:34:00 AM
Oh woww, such an intriguing and profound take for the contest, the way you've described about the different stimuli upon hearing myriad tunes of truths and certain aching symphonies of life whilst on the other hand also being soothed by the healing aura of the nature... This combination truly oscillates in the most impeccable way! A breathtaking acrostic poem.. Heartiest congratulations on the win :)
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Date: 9/14/2023 2:50:00 AM
- Congratulations, Vie Rose :) - Give thanks for your ears and all that they do ... so true :) - hugs
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Date: 9/14/2023 2:42:00 AM
I love this acrostic, so beautiful and creative how you’ve phrased your thoughts and how you’ve used words that go with hearing: profound truths, so well articulated. Well deserved win: congratulations
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:06:00 PM
True, so true on so many leverl as mintioned here.
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:22:00 PM
Thanks for the appreciative comment T S
Date: 9/13/2023 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Sara
Date: 9/12/2023 4:07:00 PM
we have to educate our ears, and solacing our lives, as much as we can, thanks Rose for the enjoyable and teachng poem , willread it again
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:21:00 PM
thanks for reading dear Yann :)

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