Hear With Out U

walking home alone thinking back to the dayz when u used to walk me home wishing it could 
be like that again wondering wat did i do wrong that u had to leave like this idk but i 
remember ur the one who said i loved u first now im wondering if u still do i now ill give the 
world 4 u even after the pain u cased me im still wayting and wishing u can hold me in ur 
arms like u used to do u no wats weard i thought u were my hole life we were best freinds 
also lovers but now all i got is a broken heart ur not even hear to heal it like u said u always 
said u would never be the one to hurt me or even let anyone hurt me now im crying hurting 
more than ever wishing u were hear healing my pain but i quess thats not going to happen it 
dosent matter how much i pray-gigglez
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 15, 2026 at 6:08 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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May 4, 2016 at 11:39 AM
deep write, Connie, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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April 16, 2016 at 3:07 PM
connie carrasco, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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January 27, 2016 at 8:16 PM
CONNIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
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January 18, 2016 at 1:39 PM
hope to see you back again. SKAT
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September 9, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Connie, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
Brown Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 11:33 AM
I am so happy to be reading your excellent poetry today Connie. I thank you for sharing it here at the Soup. Love, Carol
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