Hear the Call - the Free Flow Style

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~Hear The Call~ (Free Flow ) Dreams of doom fill me quickly, And overshadows my whole being Thoughts as dark just come to be, With impending doom, no longer clearly seeing I feel so tired and so weary All of sudden feel heavier on my feet... Nothing to hold me, I can't take a step, His evil presence makes my heart faster beat I'm falling into a darker, endless hole, And a fear like none other, raises all over me, Where horrifying, undead faces my heart coldly grips... He overpowers me and his dark riders creep on me... The precious they want from me at any cost... And the ring bids me to do his master's will, at last. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 November.01.2016 ~Author notes: From Frodo's point of view at the Prancing Pony Inn.Frodo's about to slip into darkness... -From my poetry collection and inspired by the LOTR triology and the Hobbit books and movies-

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/26/2023 7:28:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.