Healthy Conversation

We nodded first a truth aligned
A simple point we both could claim
I tried to show another mind
How others feel what fuels their flame

Their smile went cold their eyes grew hard
I’ll shut you up they spat bemocked
My words were careful soft unmarred
But hit a wall of passion locked

I sketched their steps their fears their view
A world beyond the frame we share
Yet fury drowned the insight through
A narrow gaze too sharp to care

I will not judge the spark that burned
For friendship lives beyond the fight
But still a deep divide is learned
In how we hear and what feels right

Agreement breathed but barely stirred
The lesson plain yet edged with pain
Some hearts are deaf to another word
Some minds will close though eyes remain

Only through such darkened skies
Can calmer truth and grace be reached
For now let the storm between us rise
It’s thunder spent in pursuit of peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 12:07 AM
Great poem discussing how conflicting views can be a divide and how navigating can be like walking a minefield! Sad we can’t disagree and still keep an open mind at times. This is a poignant poem great job Christopher.
Rose  Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Peace should be our ultimate goal and sometimes we need to fight to be heard, well written piece with great rhyming in it, thanks for sharing.
Delegans Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 10:05 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Mystic. Glad you enjoyed it.
Greenhough Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 4:22 PM
A great poem that's true for all time. I've been between these two worlds. An excellent poem.
Delegans Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 10:06 PM
Kind words. Thank you, Hilda.
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