Healthy Choice

Eat salad at Mickey-D's? Such a healthy choice If only I could stay strong And resist the smell Of burger and fries carbs and fat Darn!
Fast Food Epulaeryu contest 4/30/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 2:34 AM
savoring tis with funm, barbara.. congrats on the high win! :) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 8:50 PM
barbara, I have been noticing that many of the winners are burgers. And yours is a cute approach to them! Congratulations on your win!
Ronthorpe Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 3:24 PM
Good job. Congrats
Devonshire Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 2:39 PM
Your will power is strong, dear LNC. I would have a hard time resisting, but I've lost 15 pounds now as I live on V-8 and Lean Cuisine or Healthy Choice meals. Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 1:35 PM
LOL I know that feeling! Many congrats on your win, Barbara : )
Buckeridge Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 12:56 PM
The smell is just too tempting! Great win xx
Phookan Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 12:11 PM
That's next to impossible, but well as they say it's the thought that counts. a nice one. Congrats on your win Barbara. Love, gautami
Poet Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Lovely write .Congrats Barbara on your win.
Song Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 5:37 AM
Great stuff here, Barbara! You are absolutely correct that it's all in the resistance of the aroma!! Have a great weekend--enjoy'd this write!
Esquire Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Dear Barbara, YOU are on a roll, I think I Will see YOUR name in the Winners Circle For the next Couple of Weeks " SUPERB " With LOVE FOREVER AND ALWAYS...HG
Devonshire Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 12:35 PM
You have to be strong to resist the smell of burgers and fries, dear LNC. Clever poem! As one who has been living on "Healthy Choice" and "Lean Cuisine" for a month now, your poem has special meaning for me. I will try again to make phone contact. Love, Carolyn
Degenhardt Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 9:27 AM
It's hard to resist temptation, but do, McDonalds is disgusting though it smells good so don't give in LOL Perfect in form and I can hear the frustration. Michael
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 4:50 PM
Oh, I SO know this feeling, Barbara. yes, who can resist??? Good poem.
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