Health Tip

My friend Mike is a jolly good bloke
He recalls when he first drank a Coke
   Gas and acid filled his throat
   Then he belched like a goat--
For blokes who drink Coke 'tis no joke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:10 AM
I do not think COKE is going to be very happy with you, Mr. I. I really don't. I have not had a carbonated drink for over 4 years for this very reason.
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Good for you, and too bad for Coke...Some things might as well go out of business now and get it over with---like cigarette companies, Coca-Cola Corp., McDonald's Fresh Horsemeat Corp., the NFL...They are all the next Sears-Roebuck. And don't I sound like a radical socialist?! LOL! (Bernie Sanders sees me and runs the other way--fast!). Best always, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 6:29 PM
LOL - looks like a reject for a Coke advertisement... sorry, Gershon, but it is funny.
Wolf Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 7:03 PM
That's fine, Line! --It's a limerick, not a Shakesperean sonnet. LOL. Smiles! :) :) gw
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