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Health Tip

My friend Mike is a jolly good bloke He recalls when he first drank a Coke Gas and acid filled his throat Then he belched like a goat-- For blokes who drink Coke 'tis no joke

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/27/2018 11:10:00 AM

I do not think COKE is going to be very happy with you, Mr. I. I really don't. I have not had a carbonated drink for over 4 years for this very reason.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2018 11:42:00 AM

Good for you, and too bad for Coke...Some things might as well go out of business now and get it over with---like cigarette companies, Coca-Cola Corp., McDonald's Fresh Horsemeat Corp., the NFL...They are all the next Sears-Roebuck. And don't I sound like a radical socialist?! LOL! (Bernie Sanders sees me and runs the other way--fast!). Best always, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/25/2018 6:29:00 PM

LOL - looks like a reject for a Coke advertisement... sorry, Gershon, but it is funny.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/25/2018 7:03:00 PM

That's fine, Line! --It's a limerick, not a Shakesperean sonnet. LOL. Smiles! :) :) gw