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Healing River

stones slip between toes pain when walking in life's stream... river of hope heals Penned 26 August 2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/12/2014 11:20:00 AM

thank you for the reply

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2014 4:25:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - Well done, I like it,Seren :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2014 11:03:00 PM

ahhh I really like this one , Seren. Glad to finally see it.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/6/2014 11:05:00 AM

Yes Seren we do often stub our toes in the river of life. Congratulations.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations, Seren on a fine win! Excellent Haiku. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2014 7:14:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Seren it was lovely to read this agian:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 11:25:00 PM

Seren, . Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2014 2:19:00 AM

Thank you Linda for your gracious words ....Seren

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/29/2014 1:05:00 AM

nice progression of thought to tell a story. beautifully written.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2014 2:19:00 AM

Thank you Maurice ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/26/2014 7:28:00 AM

Beautiful images you have penned so well to describe what is life, Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2014 11:18:00 AM

Thanks Ram, glad you liked it...Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 8/26/2014 3:56:00 AM

Very nice Seren....the river will smooth the stones...hugs Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2014 5:09:00 AM

Hopes do heal Tim ....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2014 3:20:00 AM

love the unique take on the river theme good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan x

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2014 5:09:00 AM

Don't know Jan just a chance I have taken....Seren

Judy Konos

Date: 8/26/2014 1:04:00 AM

Good one!