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Trembling she grins, beaming resonating in shadows Soft and delicate flashes, Wiping at bruised faith Contemplating second chances Now fading, falling away Like the silence within a dream After the music creates Guitar promises, harmony From the darkness Where she remains only The stillness beneath Heavy reflections - soothing Coloring her illness, Multiple sclerosis In hues of richest wisdoms Insights to protect her from listening To the dark, the fragile, the weakness It is her strength, her conviction Lying through the images, the wishes Telling her, in brave sighs She will surely get well Never mind – the doctor’s Details, the diagnosis Frail, dissecting her grief Remembering the way Everyone has to face pain – even this Some way, some day It is impossible to mourn This memory long gone, her Fears will sing a song, Like the melody found in oaks Dancing through the wind Woods stirred by the breathe Only God could exhale In time, she will respond With prayers that never fail Her fears grow pale – in comparison To the details, the temptation Dread spreads like the branches In the strong, faithful tree Who waits, quietly – for the wind To chase its branches, its muscles Quivering beneath the weight Staggering on through Storms that betray its weakest Boughs, its faintest ache, The twinge of guilt softening Limbs who listen, hushing Away the darkness, risking all Hope for the chance of healing Will this disease reveal Her fears and tears, The way silence fades into Shadows burning away The past, the memories of times When her only worries were Defined by forgotten dreams, Echoing beneath wings As she soared – gliding into Reveries who sincerely believed This time, there would be no need For the song of grace, melting Burdens into hours full of black Will she fly again? Will she know the victory? One tear blinds her heart As she vibrates with doubts Hesitating to believe in recovery

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Date: 4/1/2023 7:25:00 PM
caught in the web of this diagnosis brings back so many memories of my time in hospitals with those with terminal outcomes....all the components, patient, family, friends, and hospital staff all revolve around the diagnosis...it is a difficult road....this poem does a wonderful expose of the patient...what a tribute it is when a poet does such a wonderful job explaining to those who must stand with them what paths must be walked...thank you so much for this
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Date: 3/29/2023 12:53:00 PM
Hi Gina, So emotive is this write of yours. You drew me in so well with it. My beautiful baby girl was just diagnosed with multiple sclerosis. I was praying the doctor's were wrong but it's definitive. She is only 42 and an in great shape, athletic, eats well, non-smoker. Doctor's seem to know more now about this disease and hopefully can slow down the progress. I hope and pray for a good prognosis here,
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Date: 3/29/2023 12:29:00 PM
So many emotions take place when a bad disease is diagnosed . One I can relate to, dear Regina.
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Date: 3/29/2023 8:45:00 AM
A lovely yet sad write. Being sick is no fun. Have a blessed day................
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Date: 3/29/2023 7:52:00 AM
Sad Gina. Pain is so debilitating, compounded with the side effects of the drugs that are supposed to "help". I'm sure it is difficult to keep the faith. Nice penning! :)
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