Healing From a Goodbye

While I drain, a kohl tint buries my face And minutes change into hours when dim sky retreats When moonlight paints a texture with pained grace; My brother laying on time's edge... dawn hangs low. The closed door grips, paling a ghostly shade I taste the bitter oil of a requiem, Eyes grating like sand , a blank frame portrayed. Spilling a moan till nightfall , to review All the vignettes from slices of laughter, Of youthful journeys through paths aflame... Still, the lucid screen of joys spent rises high Across bright clouds,feathery.. fine as mink That my own sigh releases a goodbye; As his daughter, my god-child opens the link; When we begin a new life together in my home. ----------------- When A Door Closes Contest for Broken Wings 3/28/2016
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Quigley Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 6:47 AM
A beautiful write. Congrats!
A   Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Nette, Congrats on your "When A Door Closes WIN." Luv ~LINDA~
Crisci Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Greetings, Nette. Congratulations on your winning entry in Broken Wings contest. Your awesome verses always portray vivid images and convey feelings of deep consciousness and warmth. This is another magnificent poem from the beautiful soul of my admired poetess Enjoy your glory, my friend. Hugs, Andrew.
Raven Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 5:23 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write. Love ever goes on in our journey through life and Love is the greatest healer of all. An excellent write deserving of a seven. Hugs....Mike.
Devnath  Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
Warrior Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Congrats on your win Nette...great write my friend...^WW^
Selfa Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Your works are truly heartfelt Nette! I enjoyed this one! Congratulations and a 7 for you! :) _HANS
Kimathi Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:19 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:14 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this very awesome poem nette..
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 12:55 AM
such a moving write Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Nette, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
A   Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 3:21 PM
beautiful:), it's a heartbreak to say goodbye but there is always something in store for us many blessings:), good luck in the contest
Sathasivam Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 12:37 AM
Excellent. Heartbreak write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Deschler Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 8:49 PM
A tender farewell that led to a new beginning... Beautifully expressed and deeply moving. Very nicely done, Nette ...Good luck in the contest!
Devnath  Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 1:01 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 6:05 AM
- Goodbye gives a bitter taste, always - A beautiful poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:15 PM
Wow... Love this one nette ...a7
Heemstra Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Wow! A great read! Loved the ending!
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