Gregory Richard Barden Poet Lanterne

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Headed Home

    Care
 Doth weigh
Each long stride
 From here to you,
     Gone ...

          Hopes
              I breathe
               Just one soft
              Kiss on your eyes,
           Love.





~ 3rd Place ~  in the "Light Up The Page 4" Poetry Contest, Joseph May, Judge & Sponsor.

(This is a blend of three forms - Lanterne, ABC, and Shape)

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Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2019 at 1:43 PM OUtstanding work, Greg, in this difficult form (using the restrictions placed on it) BIG congrats to you.

Heidi Sands April 27, 2019 at 1:34 PM Very nice. Congratulations :)

Joseph May April 27, 2019 at 1:33 PM Beautiful write Greg...Congrats on your win...

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2019 at 1:01 PM - Congratulations on your great win, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 16, 2019 at 7:08 AM lovely done! good luck in the contest <3 xomo