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Head, Tail and Heart

The dawn is fragrant with a ruby rose, the sunset smells as somnolent as blue night violets... In fragrance they compose its head and tail but heart belongs to you. Arbitrium Divisa 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden The original poem: The Fragrance

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2019 5:27:00 AM

Another beauty read from the impeccable poet Kurt! Hugs...Kim

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 8/20/2019 10:42:00 AM

Wow, impeccable! Rays of love from peccable poet)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2019 3:47:00 PM

I love the gorgeousness of your write AND the enjambment, of which I am always a fan!!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 8/19/2019 4:36:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. My enjambment sends his regards to yours)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/17/2019 10:42:00 AM

Ah, the fragrance and beauty of such a love, the dawn’s ruby rose, the sunset’s blue violets and everything in between. A romantic and enrapturing excerpt, Kurt. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 8/19/2019 4:33:00 PM

Thank you for lovely words, Susan. May inspiration be with you)