He Wrote a Perfect Poem

I BOW to YOU : James, The Title “ I Closed my Eyes to See, I now Dream “ Caught my eye The form Couplet : (which I’m not Good at) Touched my Heart A bit Critique: I wonder to myself ; why YOU did not Mention The Softness of her hair; (Curly Blond : Ebony Tresses : Flowing “ Auburn “) “Azure Blue Eyes” My Lenore had Emerald Green ; Reflecting in the Forest Where all of Nature Could be Astounded by the Mirror Images of Themselves “A scent so Beautifully strong “ It lures the Man’s Heart; to indulge in Forever LOVE “ my Queen” , my breath , my Heartbeat: My Everything I was born For; I die for A massage “ Her nape, shoulders the back “ Creating a Moment of Pure LOVE “ Beauty in she Abounds, through Loved eyes my Love I see" : entwined Eternity Inspired by James Fraser’s POEM “ I Closed my Eyes to See, I now Dream “ Dedicated to James Fraser, and all that He LOVES Author’s Note : I Thank-YOU James, for writing the Best POEM I Have ever Read I am putting this as a "Natural Couplet" I'm sorry it doesn't Rhyme Please Advise