He Wrote a Perfect Poem
I BOW to YOU : James, The Title “ I Closed my Eyes to See, I now Dream “
Caught my eye The form Couplet : (which I’m not Good at) Touched my Heart
A bit Critique: I wonder to myself ; why YOU did not Mention
The Softness of her hair; (Curly Blond : Ebony Tresses : Flowing “ Auburn “)
“Azure Blue Eyes” My Lenore had Emerald Green ; Reflecting in the Forest
Where all of Nature Could be Astounded by the Mirror Images of Themselves
“A scent so Beautifully strong “ It lures the Man’s Heart; to indulge in Forever LOVE
“ my Queen” , my breath , my Heartbeat: My Everything I was born For; I die for
A massage “ Her nape, shoulders the back “ Creating a Moment of Pure LOVE
“ Beauty in she Abounds, through Loved eyes my Love I see" : entwined Eternity
Inspired by James Fraser’s POEM “ I Closed my Eyes to See, I now Dream “
Dedicated to James Fraser, and all that He LOVES
Author’s Note : I Thank-YOU James, for writing the Best POEM I Have ever Read
I am putting this as a "Natural Couplet" I'm sorry it doesn't Rhyme Please Advise
Copyright © Hgarvey Daniel Esquire | Year Posted 2011
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