Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Couplet

He Wrote a Perfect Poem

I BOW to YOU : James, The Title “ I Closed my Eyes to See, I now Dream “
Caught my eye The form Couplet : (which I’m not Good at) Touched my Heart

A bit Critique: I wonder to myself ; why YOU did not Mention
The Softness of her hair; (Curly Blond : Ebony Tresses : Flowing  “ Auburn “)

 “Azure Blue Eyes” My Lenore had Emerald Green ; Reflecting in the Forest
Where  all of Nature Could be Astounded by the Mirror Images of Themselves

“A scent so Beautifully strong “  It lures the Man’s Heart; to indulge in Forever LOVE
“ my Queen” ,  my breath , my Heartbeat: My Everything I was born For; I die for

A massage “  Her nape, shoulders the back “  Creating a Moment of Pure LOVE
“ Beauty in she Abounds, through Loved eyes my Love I see" : entwined Eternity


Inspired by James Fraser’s POEM “ I Closed my Eyes to See, I now Dream “
                 Dedicated  to James Fraser, and all that He LOVES

Author’s Note :  I Thank-YOU James, for writing the Best POEM I Have ever Read 
I am putting this as a "Natural Couplet" I'm sorry it doesn't Rhyme Please Advise

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Elaine George March 31, 2011 at 2:29 PM I will go read that poem Harry, But I surmise this is one of the best I have read. Did you receive my entry in your contest?. You said you hadn't. Please let me know. Elaine

Barbara Gorelick February 20, 2011 at 5:36 PM I missed James poem but will go back and check it out. Lovely poem and the recollection of your Lenore. BG

James Fraser February 20, 2011 at 12:48 PM Hi HG, Carolyn kindly emailed me telling me of this dedication to my poem. May I say thank you for your kind words and the wonders you mention above that I could have used amidst my work. If only I had thought of them. I love the way you have intertwined my words with yours, it's delightfully written HG. I'm smiling like the cats got the cream. Have a wonderful day, and once again many many thanks.....:)

Carolyn Devonshire February 20, 2011 at 12:22 PM HG, that was such an inspiring dedication to James Fraser. I'll send him an email and suggest he read it too. I am a big fan of his work as well as yours. Love, Carolyn