Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

He Walked the Plank

His mates made old Barney walk the plank
They had, for a long time, told him he stank
For bathe he would not
Or pee in the pot
But it was his feet that were just too rank


4/14/19

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Maurice Rigoler May 19, 2019 at 8:54 PM A good one, Barbara, and simple, Nice work. And congratulations on your win. Thanks for stopping by. / M

Chuck Melugin May 1, 2019 at 8:22 AM Barbara ....you made me laugh on a rainy day! Very nice and funny!

Jan Allison April 26, 2019 at 7:32 AM love the humour here BG many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf April 22, 2019 at 1:07 PM Keep those shoes on and tightly tied, Barney! LOL. Congrats on your 'limer-winer,' BG! :) gw

Richard Lamoureux April 19, 2019 at 9:35 AM Ha ha, this is a fun one. Congrats on your stinky winner!

Eve Roper April 18, 2019 at 9:44 PM Congratulations on your wonderful Limerick win,Barbara, full of great humor. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2019 at 7:21 PM ha, I love it. Mine had a plank in it too. Congrats for your worthy win.

Lindsay Laurie April 16, 2019 at 10:56 PM G'day Barbara … I trust Barney didn't upset the fish. Enjoyed - Lindsay

Sara Kendrick April 16, 2019 at 6:00 PM Cute one ...Those stinking feet are really rough. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Janice Canerdy April 16, 2019 at 2:08 PM Good one, Barbara--CONGRATS! Janice

Tania Kitchin April 16, 2019 at 12:40 PM Ha ha Barbara, this is a very cute limerick, congratulations on your winning placement!

Joseph May April 16, 2019 at 12:33 PM Haha..that was his 'defeet'..Congrats on your win Barbara..

Carole Duet April 15, 2019 at 10:19 PM LOL...fantastic, Barbara!

Tom Cunningham April 15, 2019 at 12:03 AM No wonder they had wooden legs, their feet rotted lol. Good luck. Tom

Line Gauthier April 14, 2019 at 4:41 PM Aw those pirate days weren't so glamorous... Good one, Barbara. VERY vivid imagery! LOL