He Walked the Plank

His mates made old Barney walk the plank
They had, for a long time, told him he stank
For bathe he would not
Or pee in the pot
But it was his feet that were just too rank


4/14/19

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/19/2019 8:54:00 PM
A good one, Barbara, and simple, Nice work. And congratulations on your win. Thanks for stopping by. / M
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Date: 5/1/2019 8:22:00 AM
Barbara ....you made me laugh on a rainy day! Very nice and funny!
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Date: 4/26/2019 7:32:00 AM
love the humour here BG many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/22/2019 1:07:00 PM
Keep those shoes on and tightly tied, Barney! LOL. Congrats on your 'limer-winer,' BG! :) gw
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Date: 4/19/2019 9:35:00 AM
Ha ha, this is a fun one. Congrats on your stinky winner!
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Date: 4/18/2019 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful Limerick win,Barbara, full of great humor. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/17/2019 7:21:00 PM
ha, I love it. Mine had a plank in it too. Congrats for your worthy win.
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Date: 4/16/2019 10:56:00 PM
G'day Barbara … I trust Barney didn't upset the fish. Enjoyed - Lindsay
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Date: 4/16/2019 6:00:00 PM
Cute one ...Those stinking feet are really rough. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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Date: 4/16/2019 2:08:00 PM
Good one, Barbara--CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 4/16/2019 12:40:00 PM
Ha ha Barbara, this is a very cute limerick, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 4/16/2019 12:33:00 PM
Haha..that was his 'defeet'..Congrats on your win Barbara..
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Date: 4/15/2019 10:19:00 PM
LOL...fantastic, Barbara!
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Date: 4/15/2019 12:03:00 AM
No wonder they had wooden legs, their feet rotted lol. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 4/14/2019 4:41:00 PM
Aw those pirate days weren't so glamorous... Good one, Barbara. VERY vivid imagery! LOL
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