Get Your Premium Membership

He Walked the Plank

His mates made old Barney walk the plank They had, for a long time, told him he stank For bathe he would not Or pee in the pot But it was his feet that were just too rank 4/14/19

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/19/2019 8:54:00 PM
A good one, Barbara, and simple, Nice work. And congratulations on your win. Thanks for stopping by. / M
Login to Reply
Date: 5/1/2019 8:22:00 AM
Barbara ....you made me laugh on a rainy day! Very nice and funny!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2019 7:32:00 AM
love the humour here BG many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2019 1:07:00 PM
Keep those shoes on and tightly tied, Barney! LOL. Congrats on your 'limer-winer,' BG! :) gw
Login to Reply
Date: 4/19/2019 9:35:00 AM
Ha ha, this is a fun one. Congrats on your stinky winner!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/18/2019 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful Limerick win,Barbara, full of great humor. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2019 7:21:00 PM
ha, I love it. Mine had a plank in it too. Congrats for your worthy win.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2019 10:56:00 PM
G'day Barbara … I trust Barney didn't upset the fish. Enjoyed - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2019 6:00:00 PM
Cute one ...Those stinking feet are really rough. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2019 2:08:00 PM
Good one, Barbara--CONGRATS! Janice
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2019 12:40:00 PM
Ha ha Barbara, this is a very cute limerick, congratulations on your winning placement!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2019 12:33:00 PM
Haha..that was his 'defeet'..Congrats on your win Barbara..
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2019 10:19:00 PM
LOL...fantastic, Barbara!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2019 12:03:00 AM
No wonder they had wooden legs, their feet rotted lol. Good luck. Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 4/14/2019 4:41:00 PM
Aw those pirate days weren't so glamorous... Good one, Barbara. VERY vivid imagery! LOL
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things