Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Limerick

He Thought Himself Cute

There was a man who thought himself as cute*

Believed that women saw him as ripe fruit 

At the mirror always looked

With himself was surly hooked

Feared his charms were about from him to loot! 



(C) Demetrios Trifiatis

         24 July 2015


* I have noticed that a lot of poets, these days, are 
writing Limericks so, not to be... outdone, I thought 
to try once!

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Jack Ellison July 26, 2015 at 4:26 PM Welcome to the club my dear Demetrios! This was fun... more please! Cheers, Jack Demetrios Trifiatis July 28, 2015 at 2:06 PM Thank you Mr. President. It is an honor!

Afolabi Muideen July 25, 2015 at 2:52 AM A wonderful write here.......A.M. Demetrios Trifiatis July 28, 2015 at 2:06 PM A.M. thank you for your kind visit and comment!

Afolabi Muideen July 24, 2015 at 5:42 PM You penned this extremely great also you are a great, your write is cute and sweet.........A.M. Demetrios Trifiatis July 28, 2015 at 2:10 PM Thank you for your dear comment my friend, A.M.

Tim Smith July 24, 2015 at 4:42 PM Excellent limerick my friend. Have a great weekend. Demetrios Trifiatis July 24, 2015 at 5:40 PM You too have a nice weekend my friend, Tim. Thank you for visiting!

Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:27 PM :) So, you are trying the funny side of things, my dear poet. :) Who is the cute man, may we know? Hugs Demetrios Trifiatis July 24, 2015 at 1:07 PM For once, just for once because humor is part of life, isn't it? There are a lot of cute men in the world, no one in particular. I think I might delete it! Thank you for visiting though, dear Eileen!

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 7:49 AM Glad to see you jump on the limerick express Demetrios:- I love writing limericks Demetrios in fact I have just posted a string of 3 lol:-) hugs Jan xx Demetrios Trifiatis July 24, 2015 at 8:26 AM Well, I thought to try. I visited yours, they are hilarious. Thank you, Jan!

Kp Nunez July 24, 2015 at 7:25 AM That's funny! Not bad for a first try, sire. Now, maybe you can post some more every now and then. Limerick is fun, a real challenge to flex the brain muscles while delivering the punch! Good morning!. hugs! Demetrios Trifiatis July 24, 2015 at 8:25 AM From time to time, maybe, dear Kim. Thank you for your approval.