He Says - She Says

[He says]Never say ?I can't? 

     Why on Earth not meet defeat
     admit you're seldom right
     Saying you CAN is vanity
     and looking for a fight.

[He says] Don'?t look back on failure ...

 Dwell on failure is what I say
 thank failure with a smile!
 A learning tool is what it is
 to shorten your next mile.

Good results are scant [He says]

     Oh goodness, where are you looking?
     You breathe the air where roses bloom
     and eat your wife's fine cooking.
     Taste the gift of life; don't focus on doom.

[He says] But, praise is less than complaint!

 Enjoy the ACTION she says, not the "at a boy!'
 you decide, what you value
 and whose judgments to deploy
 Your opinion of self is what you should pursue.

Embrace the TRUTH with stoic composure. [He says]

     The truth...which truth is that?
     Laugh, I say, in the face of those
     who would oppose you, tip your hat.
     Revealations comes to those who grow!

[He says]Be rawhide tough and BULLDOG mean.

 Oh God, what men don't do?
 Be sweet, be soft be kind I say
 and like will return to you
 for your soul you've not betrayed.

Defeat [He says] has no place in our repertoire ...

Now here she says, it's not defeat to wish upon a star.


He says: Charles Henderson, She says: Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/16/2012 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 6:28:00 PM
Just saw it at Deb's place and found it very unique among the contest winners. Congratulations on a well done job with that wonderful DEBS. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/14/2012 5:22:00 PM
good collaboration. loved the ending! congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/13/2012 2:24:00 PM
What a very uniquely written poem, Charles & Debbie! I really liked how you tackled this, very cool how you did the "he says, she says" part :) and just me, I love how the woman has the last word (ummm line) here ;) loved the ending, you're a gentleman to do so ;) Congrats to you and Debbie! :)
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Date: 1/13/2012 12:30:00 PM
a duo on a highly charming poetic climb... congrats deb and charles! :) huggs
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Date: 1/13/2012 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your joint win x
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:23:00 AM
CONGRATS CHARLES ON A FABULOUS WIN WITH DEBBIE.. MOST EXCELLENT ENTRY LUV.. HAPPY NEW YEAR..
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Date: 1/11/2012 2:39:00 PM
Good job you two..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:51:00 AM
An impressive joint venture...love the ideas and the banter...enjoyed !!
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