He Said She Said { Footle }

her lips                             his eyes
    just flips                                tells lies


      her nose                            his ears
            just glows                           snipped spears

          cheekbones                              his chin
                   like stones                              looks grim

                 eyebrows                                lashes
                          just wow                              flashes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haniff Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 2:05 PM
cute footles ...creative write n good luck in the contest! love n smiles Maryam*
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May 2, 2009 at 12:02 PM
Wow! This is so creative. Nice use of humor. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
Strand Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 8:41 AM
Best wishes with this original write Katherinergds Brian
Loving Iii Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 8:27 AM
well , i guess that at a certain age you would have to "snip spears" and "tell lies"when everything "looks grim" and you really need theos back "flashes". jhl
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