He Said and She Thought

"He sings his hymns every night, that she will know
the sounds that echo in his heart."
  A gift he offers to soothe my lonely days
  for in most of my waking hours we must be apart.

"She reveals a hint of a mystery lady
in her words and reflections."
  No mystery am I to the one I hold dear
  My love proclaimed with tender affections.

"Faith and love are the essential secrets to happiness.
That you possess both," he said, "is a great gift."
    Thereafter, he sparked in me a flame of desire
    I penned my emotions with the speed of a swift.

"That you can express them so beautifully is a joy to read.
But not all puzzles," said he, "need to reveal their true self."
    I pondered his words, wondering what he'd meant
    Was he expressing love or I am fooling myself?

"Like two lovers lost in the night sky, only to find one was a fixed star
and the other a shooting star, fading, lost in the dawning of light."
  Confused, I waited with questions, clarification of what he meant.
  Time passed slowly until he came to me that night.

"Some walls are built to keep things out and some to keep them in.
And some walls we need to just tear down. Once more unto the breach."
    I knew there was a wall between us. Could it be torn down?
    Did he want me in his life or out? His reply I would beseech.

"I felt this one deeply, Jen. Every line an ode to love,
just fingertips apart yet somehow distant. How deep the trenches."
    I knew the answer and was flushed with relief
    He spoke of love's flame and the fire in him that I quench.

"Sometimes with emotional waves, you never see them coming
then all of sudden they hit you like a tsunami."
  I contemplated every word he had spoken
  as I walked along the shore on a night warm and balmy.

"Joy and misery are the fulfillment of life and experience.
You can't know one without the other."
    It's a life of happiness I want to share with him
    To have the joy of loving him forever is what I'd rather. 

"The mysterious raven - harbinger in the night, silhouette at the window,"
he added, "Like honey, baby, from the bee, you leave me wanting more."
  No more questions did I ask during our trysting time together
  Hours spent laughing and loving with the swan I'd come to adore.

April-8-2023-kj
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Ricci Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 3:33 AM
Good Morning Jenna. I feel very blessed and honored to have turned to your page and entry. Allow me to say it is most beautiful well thought out and wonderfully executed in its entirety starting with your title to which caught my eye to turn the page. You obviously are a skilled writer. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Enjoy the morning and weekend too. (smile)
Daniel Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 8:49 PM
Quite a creative poem, Jenna, beautiful merging of thoughts interwoven with love:)
Logan Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 9:35 PM
Thanks so much, Jo. I enjoyed writing it.
May Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 4:28 PM
Like the rose, love has its thorns, and we must accept the beauty with the pain, joy and heartache, Wonderful write Jenna
Logan Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 4:42 PM
Hi Joseph. Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments.
Turner Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 6:47 AM
Very well written. A bit unusual format but very creative. It's always been a mystery to me how a lot of poets write love poems but are not actually in love or their last love did not work out for some reason. Im not in love and have a hard time writing a "love" poem. Nicely penned, Jenna:) You did this one well.
Logan Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 8:16 AM
I must have the heart of a romantic or I’m a fool in love. I can’t take credit for every line… just the melding of them together. Thanks, Danny.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 3:28 PM
I agree this is a wonderful idea to use lines given as replies to your poetry, this is a lovely poem… Belle
Logan Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 3:40 PM
Thanks so much, Belle.
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Hey what a great idea Jenna, I just seen your comment to Deb, how clever is that using past comments as the first two lines in each stanza and coming up with another wonderful romantic piece, ingenuity at its best, cheers David
Logan Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 12:36 PM
Thanks, David. The results turned out better than I’d hoped. It was all about intertwining them as if his words and her thoughts were happening simultaneously.
M  Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Wow…here you go again Jenna another exquisite poem of love…just beautiful! One of your paintings? Debx
Logan Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 9:57 AM
I can only take credit for the poetry, and then only the 'she thought' part. The first two lines of each verse are actual comments given to me on quite a few of my poems. The lovely artwork is credited to Andrei Markin. Thanks for the kudos, chick!
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