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He Rendered Me a Gift

He offered me a painted flower Its genus I did not know But the token gift had the power to melt my heart of snow I really didn't give a fig if it had been a bent twig The gift he rendered on a whim was the best part of him

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/20/2023 1:12:00 AM

A great painting and a beautiful poem, Jenna:)

Arlo Parker

Date: 4/2/2023 10:13:00 PM

P(painting)OTD, Belle. Speechless, seriously. duh, duh, duh, blah, blah, blah, etc. ~:o)

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/4/2023 2:52:00 AM

lol AP, your 'blah, blah, blah, tells me exactly what you want to say. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/2/2023 8:32:00 PM

Not only a brilliant poet but an artist too, you're very talented Jenna. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2023 9:58:00 PM

Hi Tom! Thanks a bunch. I think I'll just use a few of my paintings and write something to go with them... as time permits.

Deb M

Date: 4/2/2023 6:50:00 PM

Poetry and paintings how talented you are Boss! Lovely…..Debx

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2023 8:13:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Deb. If you're looking for a raise, you get one. Sorry I've been out of town for a while, but my place is in good hands.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/2/2023 3:20:00 PM

You are quite a talented young lady. I like the poem and the painting. Have a great evening, Jenna.

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2023 3:38:00 PM

Thank you very much, Danny. Enjoy yours, too, and the better weather.

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/2/2023 2:10:00 PM

Wonderful painting and poem Jenna, a warm picture of a hopeful budding romance seems to jump of the page, you’re a talented gal indeed, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/2/2023 3:17:00 PM

Thank you, David. It's all about the poem, but I remembered this painting, so there it hangs.