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He Likens Marieta To a Cactus

The cactus is a joyless plant which to dry slopes inclines, and those who would engage with it are sure to feel its spines. But once in every year or two, the cactus brings forth fruits: and then its golden succulence its grimmer self confutes. Before the "chumba" pine swells up, the cactus flames in flower, and I would brave its fiercest staves, to see it in that hour!

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Date: 3/12/2017 8:46:00 AM
Cactus and joyless, how wrong! Their flowers are exquisite (and tasteful). Really! And beautiful new red cactus 'babies' before they turn green. This is a quite sensual poem if you read it a certain way, and I enjoy this :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/12/2017 9:05:00 AM
LOL Thank you for correcting my lack of cactus-friendly awareness.

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