He Likens Marieta To a Cactus

The cactus is a joyless plant 
which to dry slopes inclines, 
and those who would engage with it 
are sure to feel its spines. 

But once in every year or two, 
the cactus brings forth fruits: 
and then its golden succulence 
its grimmer self confutes. 

Before the "chumba" pine swells up, 
the cactus flames in flower, 
and I would brave its fiercest staves, 
to see it in that hour!
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March 12, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Cactus and joyless, how wrong! Their flowers are exquisite (and tasteful). Really! And beautiful new red cactus 'babies' before they turn green. This is a quite sensual poem if you read it a certain way, and I enjoy this :)
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March 12, 2017 at 9:05 AM
LOL Thank you for correcting my lack of cactus-friendly awareness.
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