He Left Her a Poem

On the streets of the tent-city
   the lad grew up fast
Crime, drugs and vice
   How long could he last

A rich heiress had pity
   took him into her home
Too late to reform him
   He left her this poem:

   HIV bug
   Grave dug
   Cry not
     ~ I rot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Legros Kelley Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 12:33 AM
Sad. It is indeed the scenario for many in our country nowadays. It makes me so sad.
Hawkins Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 6:12 PM
I dug my grave Which I'll lie I had a choice I chose to die. WOW! How sad.
Sands Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Powerful poem Gershon. Well done :)
Rodgers Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 5:58 AM
Hello Gershon, A very powerful poem and ending. I work in Philadelphia, where there are tent cities, lots of illegal drugs, and death. It is so sad to watch. I am a therapist in the city and get to help this population. Thanks for the power of the poet. - Blessings, Daniel
White Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 5:39 AM
Wow, dramatic beautiful poem GW, kelli
Jones Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 1:10 AM
Wow very powerful what a great impact with so few words! Well done.
Baker Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 11:00 PM
Ouch! cruel lad, him act real bad, probably him had, no dad. That's sad. Good rhyme poetry though. WTG gw! BB
Greenhough Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 10:09 PM
An interesting poem. Your writings always wake me to problems of today.
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