He Is Still Watching

I toss. I turn.
Winking Sleep
impervious to bags
crying out for closure.
"It`s far too crowded 
in that bed!" she says.
A presence stirs.

The presence stares.
Watching...
Waiting...
Watching.
Waiting.

He goes by many names. 
Fear is how I address him
NO!I lie-
I don`t address him at all.
He just watches.

Some nights, I don`t mind him so.
        How can I?
His the only Friend I've 
Ever known.
He watches over me,
        Doesn't he?
Pulls my timid strings
so ventures beyond the edges
of the Continent Conservatism 
I will never dream of.
He is a Friend.
        Right?

Maybe, one night:
I`ll sever the cords Tradition 
lashing a fragile back.
Send Fear packing.
Courage will be 
my new bed mate.

Will Sleep finally come to me?

Until then, he will be-
Watching...
Waiting...
Watching.
Waiting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/26/2013 8:09:00 AM
What a night watch!
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Date: 9/22/2013 12:00:00 PM
well done ! I love your name , and congratulations on your well deserved win .
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:25:00 AM
congratulations Yvette, , enjoyed your winning poem. Hugs*SKAT
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Date: 9/17/2013 2:27:00 PM
Great topic that you have chose about which to write your winning work..Congrats on your win..Fear is something that we all face in our lives..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2013 7:52:00 PM
Congrats - Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 9/15/2013 6:53:00 AM
Good one
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:07:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, lisa
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:14:00 PM
Yvette, Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
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Date: 9/9/2013 12:53:00 PM
- Well done, nice poem Yvette !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2013 2:05:00 AM
I can almost see images relating to the poem. "watching, waiting.." etc. You inspire me a lot. Good luck Sis!..JM
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Date: 9/6/2013 11:39:00 AM
EXCELLENT PIECE OF WRITING
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