He Is Gone

Silence like a bird without song
Lost rays of heat when day was long
Cool breeze of seasons gone

Past words of love that go amiss
Romantic days so full of bliss
Promises are long gone

Lifetime of love that seemed fleeting
Flames of passion now retreating 
Years that have come and gone

Memories just left to enshrine
When love was once so truly mine
All that before - for he is gone! 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/21/2024 7:07:00 PM
Ah this is a passionate write! Your words pull us into your despair. Great job
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Christina Bowring
Date: 2/21/2024 10:10:00 PM
Much gratitude to you dear Karen for another lovely visit. So kind of you. Thank you so much for your valued support. Have a great day xx :):)
Date: 2/21/2024 7:04:00 PM
Ah this is a passionate write! Your words pull us into your despair. Great job
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Date: 1/13/2024 2:42:00 PM
Love in full bloom when road blocks are deployed, must be the saddest love of all. When it slowly slips away, there are "slippery when wet" "proceed with caution" even "detour" signs to warn you, and prepare for what's coming. When a road block suddenly appears, there is not time to apply the brakes, and love hits with full force, leaving a damaged heart and memories. An amazing poem Chris. Thank you.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 1/15/2024 2:17:00 AM
Dear SV, thank you so much for leaving such beautiful, thoughtful comments here. Poetry in itself! I love how you have mentioned road blocks and signs. How true are your words. Reflective comments that I have so enjoyed reading and gratefully received. Much gratitude to you :):)
Date: 12/30/2023 10:14:00 AM
Gosh I even have comments way down here. I wonder if I have seen all your poetry!
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Christina Bowring
Date: 12/31/2023 10:15:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I so enjoy your visits and you always put a big smile :) on my face my lovely. I’m so slow at writing poems (hence not many yet) that I reckon I would win lots of prizes for the slowest poet ever! I’m in awe of anyone, especially you, who can write magnificent poems at speed and sometimes several a day! Awesome! I applaud you all. I’ve just checked and don’t think you’ve visited ‘Tis You’ and ‘Willow’. Now I’m thinking about it, I have a feeling same title with the ‘willow ‘as one of your poems. If I’m right, I’m so sorry. I shall be reading and enjoying lots more of your poetry and learning from you in 2024. Hugs and New Year wishes xx
Date: 9/16/2023 7:36:00 AM
Loss is something life altering. I know how we carry our ghosts with us. Thank you for this posting, Christina, that reminds us how deeply an imprint loss can leave. Sincerest regards, Brian
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Christina Bowring
Date: 9/16/2023 1:34:00 PM
Thank you so very much Brian for your visit and lovely, thoughtful comments. Very appreciated. Warmest wishes to you.
Date: 9/11/2023 11:35:00 AM
Amazing Christina, I feel sadness in these words, but this is something that happens every day. It's so deep, that I can walk on the shoes of every word you wrote. Do you know?....Every day I enjoy more and more reading your poems. I will read them little by little. Sometimes, it takes me a while, because I need to translate some words to appreciate the complete meaning. At the same time, I'm learning a little bit more. I loved it. Have a nice evening my friend Christinaxxxx
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Christina Bowring
Date: 9/12/2023 6:50:00 AM
Dear Maria, thank you my lovely friend for such amazing, touching comments. I am equally honoured and delighted that you are enjoying reading the poems. That means a lot to me. I shall equally continue to enjoy yours and may I say your English is coming along very, very well and this wonderful site and your lovely poetry will continue to enhance it. Love and hugs to you my friend.xxx :)
Date: 9/2/2023 1:44:00 AM
You spread words onto the screen like spreading a handcrafted quilt. It means so much to the reader because you let your heart be felt.. Magic Christina.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 9/2/2023 3:58:00 AM
Dear SV, again my heartfelt thanks for your beautiful comments. What you have written is beautifully poetic in itself. Thank you so much. It means a lot. Hugs and smiles to you my friend.xx
Date: 8/20/2023 11:30:00 AM
Very touching write Christina, heartbreak usually spawns great writing this one is no exception.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 8/21/2023 1:58:00 AM
My grateful thanks to you John for your wonderful comments. Very much appreciated. I look forward to enjoying more of your work. Blessings.
Date: 8/20/2023 6:41:00 AM
Lovely, touching and sad all in one, Christina. Lost love leaves an impact on a person's life, and you project that in this poem. I like your rhyming, and the repeated "gone" which leaves its mark. ~ Regards // paul
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Christina Bowring
Date: 8/21/2023 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Paul for your visit and leaving such lovely, encouraging comments. My grateful thanks to you. Warmest wishes.
Date: 7/9/2023 11:27:00 AM
Lovely penning Christine, with nice flowing rhyme and expression. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 5/26/2023 3:23:00 PM
A very touching ode to your lost love, well done~
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Date: 5/14/2023 10:43:00 AM
I love this type of poetry. A fave.
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Date: 5/11/2023 8:12:00 AM
A tender write, yet so moving and powerful... A very, very well written poem, Christina.
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Date: 4/28/2023 7:02:00 PM
Beautifully written thoughts on lost love and regret, Christina. :)
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