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J.S.Bach - Cantata BWV 208 - (Schafe können sicher weiden)

This Cantata, it is one of my favourites. I always wanted to write a text of my own to it. And so I did... adding it as lyric, You should really  listen to the music while reading, because the text should follow the music VERY closely...

 

 

Chorus: He held his heart For his chest was breaking She held her head  Cause her skull was aching Oh  What pains our troubled souls To the point of  disbelief  Over the edge of killing grief In an abyss of cold reprieve  Verse: He held her tight, of fear she would leave him Sadness grabbed his guilt With iron grip (He held his heart For his chest was breaking) She held her head  Cause her skull was aching Oh  What pains our troubled souls In darkness Oh To the point of  disbelief  She held him tight, to dance with him A waltz of loss He kissed her hair For his heart was breaking She held tight for she was aching A dance of losing love Chorus: He held his heart For his chest was breaking She held her head  Cause her skull was aching Oh  What pains our troubled souls To the point of  disbelief  Over the edge of killing grief In an abyss of cold reprieve  Bridge: "Let go Let go, oh, my lovely For it is time to grant me my freedom to choose my life in my own selfish way" Chorus: He held his heart For his chest was breaking She held her head  Cause her skull was aching Oh  What pains our troubled souls To the point of  disbelief  Over the edge of killing grief In an abyss of cold reprieve  Verse: "I love you, I do But life is a cruel fiend Please be my friend Though I cannot be here But love someone else  I will hold you so dear I love a man, you love me How cruel Please find someone to give What you need most You! My wife, my companion, For life So they said... They say so much I hurt everything in you I love you so" He held her tight, of fear she would leave him Sadness grabbed his guilt With iron grip He held his heart For his chest was breaking (She held her head  Cause her skull was aching) Oh  What pains our troubled souls In darkness Oh To the point of  disbelief  She held him tight, to dance with him A waltz of loss He kissed her hair For his heart was breaking She held tight for she was aching A dance of losing love Chorus: He held his heart For his chest was breaking She held her head  Cause her skull was aching Oh  What pains our troubled souls To the point of  disbelief  Over the edge of killing grief In an abyss of cold reprieve  *** February 17, 2017

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Date: 2/27/2017 5:35:00 PM
amazing,, I love it...
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Darren White
Date: 2/27/2017 10:53:00 PM
Thank you Mohamed :)
Date: 2/18/2017 12:46:00 PM
Song , poetry , jewel and gleaming beauty! Lyrics that both amaze and please in their depth and flow. A7.. fav..
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 12:48:00 PM
Robert, thank you so very much, I am deeply honoured...
Date: 2/18/2017 12:03:00 AM
Has anyone ever told you you are a poet? Ops I just did!
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 12:36:00 AM
Thanks Arthur :)
Date: 2/17/2017 11:05:00 PM
wonderful song you have created Hugs Eve
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Darren White
Date: 2/18/2017 12:01:00 AM
Thank you, Eve, hugs :)
Date: 2/17/2017 9:35:00 AM
Roll over Beethoven....Wow Darren, this blew me away, what a fantastic piece or lyrical writing. I just loved this. My friend, if your middle name is not talent, it should be.
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Darren White
Date: 2/17/2017 9:44:00 AM
Chris, I so hoped you would like it. This one, unlike other poems, is one that I worked on for weeks. And no matter what, I am proud of it, there are things I should and could improve, but overal? Thank you, my friend, you just made my day :)
Date: 2/17/2017 3:58:00 AM
The lyric by itself is lovely and when you read it to the piano notes it really comes alive-magical <3 <3 <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/17/2017 4:04:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend <3
Date: 2/17/2017 2:10:00 AM
- Beautiful and touching lyrics, Darren (wonderful music in the background) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darren White
Date: 2/17/2017 2:17:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much, glad you liked the music :)

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