He Hath Come

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Vines upon the tombstones weave their fingered laced design
Smothering the dates of those beneath
Gravesites feed the thicket with its thorns of razor twine   
Wrapped mosaic patterns like a wreath

Here of heavy mist a ghostly figure sets his sight
Silhouetted by a lonely glare
Even still the moon doth hide enveloped by the night
Every movement he is now aware 

Standing midst the shadows with his sickle at his side
Looking to the noose, this crooked tree
Hanging from a branch a man of darker color died
Only cause he hoped for more to be

Blood collects the lawn down there below the evil deed
Staining every dripping blade of grass
Hate, he knows full well hath come along to plant the seed
Time is not enough for it to pass

Following the tracks the earthly mud has held complete
Looking to the distance through the rain
Taking on the pathway painted lone in lost defeat
Pushing far aside the constant pain

He is the collector of the souls this place hath born
Not of those who gasped their final breath
For the one who tied the knot so tightly that was worn
Equaling the score, death for a death

Pausing midst the granite carved of names long since deceased
Sharpening his blade of serpent’s tongue
Staring towards the passages these lives atoned released    
Dressed in caustic dreams of those so young

Flee with every ounce of strength your body can create
Slowly he shall walk along this way
Nowhere shall be far enough, for now it is too late
He hath come to take your life away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/14/2016 11:48:00 AM
A touch of the scary of Halloween written in these lines..Congrats on your placement on the winners' list..Sara..Thanks for the visit to my page..
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Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sara. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 10/10/2016 10:11:00 AM
Chris, congratulations on your win in my contest with this well penned write ~
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Broken Wings for your kindness. I am happy you enjoyed this one and very grateful you chose it as one of the winning poems in your contest. I am honored you did.
Date: 10/9/2016 11:28:00 AM
Chris, wow! Thats all I can say about this one-you have a true gift Chris! Very well written I loved it. congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2016 2:42:00 PM
Thank you so very much Laura for your kind comments. I appreciate your visit today. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 10/7/2016 11:49:00 PM
You are flourishing well Chris. Skat
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Date: 10/8/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thanks so much again Skat
Date: 10/7/2016 5:04:00 PM
Holy terrorized night, after those delightful seashells you took me to bloody hell. Frightfully awe-inspiring, I might not sleep tonight. Good luck with the contest!
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Date: 10/7/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thanks so very much Paloma for this deep review of my poem. I hope it does not keep you awake past dark, just in case. : )
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