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amid the bleats of lambs and the moo of cows in a far away manger a baby, swaddled in rags was born though despicable in some eyes, He was the clone of Clones the one, though Heaven sent, was the humblest of the humble, who halved history! He walked the hills of Judea with disciples many healed the sick met people lived one among them until three decades and three years the cloud laden sky suddenly turned dark the spirit of evil invaded inside and outside premonitions of portentous occurrence!! at Gethsemane the fatal rendezvous, He sweated blood as coins tinkled, Judas through a kiss betrayed his master was sentenced by the marshals of power and was convicted Pontius Pilate, washing hands, absolved himself of his guilt He tottered to Calvary, lay on the cross, not by nails but pinned by love He poured down love on those never deserved to his love, there is no end... among the hisses of revulsion and the screams of a vengeful crowd the tremulous cadence of an agonized cry “why hast Thou forsaken me?” died down….. did Golgotha’s cliffs echo that cry? The Father kept ‘an aggressive silence’ The Sun (Son) set at noon darkness shrouded the Earth the curtain fell but on the 3rd day walked out of the grave defeating Death and Sin! Our Lord has Risen….! to this day the world hails this victory!! ______________________ Easter Poetry Contest Sponsor- Regina McIntosh

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Date: 4/8/2023 10:17:00 AM
Valsa, I want to shout "Alleluia" after reading your beautiful Easter song that recounts Jesus' life and life saving death upon a cross so He can amaze us with His jaw-dropping love and victory over death!!! A victory He shares with and for us!! As always, your poem is filled with amazing, inspiring images. I always look forward to being inspired by your words dear friend. Sending you Easter blessings of joy in this season of Alleluia! Indeed, He Is Risen!! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/8/2023 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/ending Yes, a Victory!!!  "Happy Easter" with blessings...................
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Date: 4/8/2023 12:26:00 AM
Love it. Congrats and Happy Easter. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/8/2023 4:42:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Gina for the honor given to my poem. I am so delighted!
Date: 4/18/2022 2:49:00 AM
Thank you Valsa Thank you Valsa Thank you Valsa Told victoriously. Poetically by a CVRISTian in India, possibly attending a church connected with Thomas of Syria, evangelizing India in halved history after Jesus' Resurrection victory. Hallelujah with all loyal angels & saints.
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Date: 4/17/2022 11:11:00 AM
Easter Day is almost over now, Today I read a detailed description of the shroud of Turin, Italy. It was so true how he suffered. But now he is risen. Alleluia.
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Date: 4/17/2022 4:42:00 AM
Words of devotion and faith resonate throughout, Valsa. A story well told in heartfelt verse. All the best to you on this festive day.
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Date: 4/16/2022 10:04:00 PM
WoW! Valsa, This is such a well written and apt poem for Easter. A good read from start to finish. The latter portion of your amazing poem sums up your message very well. Hallelujah, he has risen. Happy Easter to you and your family;-) Alexis
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