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Written on May 14, 2024

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He Has Only Just Begun

On swift wings, blessed by the light, who pours out the melody, scriptures come to life – in the song, joyful noises, crafted by hope, soothing away the dark, coloring the life in gentle truth, praises poured out, all through the music, songs drifting, on the edge of a heart – rhythmic, beyond the winds, who remember only the showers, the storm who haunts with its whisper, blessings gesture to the souls who recall… on swift wings, they soar, gliding through the skies, at peace with the graceful sun, at peace… they seem to sing, ‘just see what God has done’, “J U S T S E E… what God has done… And, He has only just begun! He has only just begun!!!!
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Woods Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 3:13 AM
Thank you for a wonderful contest and placing my poem, "Christ, My Living Hope". Phil Wickem sings a gorgeous song called My Living Hope... if you haven't heard it you should check it out!<3
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June 10, 2024 at 7:21 PM
Lovely, Regina. I like your references to "swift wings", "on the edge of the heart' and "beyond the winds". I fear the church may be judged for careless indifference towards or even ignorance of the Holy Spirit similar to the way in which the Jewish people rejected Jesus as the Christ, the promised Redeemer. How many church members truly realize that when they profess Jesus as their Lord and Savior, they become the temple of His Holy Spirit? Love your thoughts expressed here, Regina.
Woods Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:37 AM
The birds and the whole earth sing praise to their creator and you've captured that song so beautifully here! I heard each word whispered in my mind... blessings to you!
Hawley Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 6:20 PM
Thank you for this template to your contest.
Rose  Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 3:59 PM
this is a perfect example Regina, love it
Croft Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 10:53 AM
A very beautiful poem
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May 18, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Sophisticated well-penned poetry Gina, feathered creatures were bestowed with a melodious voice by God, producing delightful melodies that may be heard on Earth. Thanks for my placement in your last contest, very honored.
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May 17, 2024 at 9:22 PM
Simply sublime!
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May 17, 2024 at 7:12 PM
Beautiful free verse poetry Gina, God gave melodic voice to the birds, wonderful sounds to be heard on earth… Beryl
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May 14, 2024 at 8:17 AM
They sing of hope…hope after night is over…after the storm…to comfort…God comforts! Hugs ~ Kim
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