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Written on May 14, 2024

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On swift wings, blessed by the light, who pours out the melody, scriptures come to life – in the song, joyful noises, crafted by hope, soothing away the dark, coloring the life in gentle truth, praises poured out, all through the music, songs drifting, on the edge of a heart – rhythmic, beyond the winds, who remember only the showers, the storm who haunts with its whisper, blessings gesture to the souls who recall… on swift wings, they soar, gliding through the skies, at peace with the graceful sun, at peace… they seem to sing, ‘just see what God has done’, “J U S T S E E… what God has done… And, He has only just begun! He has only just begun!!!!

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Date: 5/28/2024 8:37:00 AM
The birds and the whole earth sing praise to their creator and you've captured that song so beautifully here! I heard each word whispered in my mind... blessings to you!
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Date: 5/25/2024 6:20:00 PM
Thank you for this template to your contest.
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Date: 5/21/2024 3:59:00 PM
this is a perfect example Regina, love it
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Date: 5/19/2024 10:53:00 AM
A very beautiful poem
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Date: 5/18/2024 9:06:00 AM
Sophisticated well-penned poetry Gina, feathered creatures were bestowed with a melodious voice by God, producing delightful melodies that may be heard on Earth. Thanks for my placement in your last contest, very honored.
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Date: 5/17/2024 9:22:00 PM
Simply sublime!
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Date: 5/17/2024 7:12:00 PM
Beautiful free verse poetry Gina, God gave melodic voice to the birds, wonderful sounds to be heard on earth… Beryl
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Date: 5/14/2024 4:39:00 PM
a soft and soulful poem, dear Gina! I love the way you wove the imagery of tiny birds into your poem (joyful noises) I have to admit that when I hear birds sing I think of them as part of God's choir. The last line echoed in my heart. A fave. enjoy your evening, hugs & blessings, Sara
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Date: 5/14/2024 8:17:00 AM
They sing of hope…hope after night is over…after the storm…to comfort…God comforts! Hugs ~ Kim
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