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When three friends entered the egg and spoon race Pooh did not think that his pals stood a chance he's so convinced that he’d come in first place he’d pre-prepared a new victory dance Pooh did not think that his pals stood a chance Until he dropped his boiled egg on the floor he’d pre-prepared a new victory dance as he had always won this race before Until he dropped his boiled egg on the floor he's so convinced that he’d come in first place as he had always won this race before when three friends entered the egg and spoon race Pantoum Rhyme 1 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper Image 4 Checked with Rhymezone AND HOW MANY SYLLABLES - 10 PER LINE 07/17/21

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Date: 8/18/2021 7:34:00 PM
Loved how you chose this image and ran with it, Jan, great Pantoum . . . ; )
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Date: 8/17/2021 10:28:00 AM
Love this Jan! Delightful fun. Winnie the Pooh is a delightful part of childhood! Congrats and kudos on your win!
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Date: 8/16/2021 1:41:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Jan. Janice
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Date: 8/16/2021 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. Pooh is a fun bear to have around. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:14:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/14/2021 11:38:00 AM
A super take on the pic prompt, Jan. Well deserving of a top win. Congrats and commendations are in order.
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Date: 8/13/2021 10:04:00 PM
Great title, Jan, very fun read, congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:31:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/19/2021 2:29:00 PM
If he’d put a drop of honey in the spoon, the egg would have stuck a bit better. Fun write, Jan, all the best in the contest. Terry
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Date: 7/18/2021 5:45:00 PM
Terrific pantoum; a fun read!
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Date: 7/18/2021 4:35:00 PM
Poor old Pooh. Nice write. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/18/2021 12:52:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest ... definitely a winner :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2021 11:23:00 AM
This is really well done when one considers that most children today believe they should win without practicing!
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Date: 7/18/2021 10:31:00 AM
Poor pooh, I feel for him and his blighted hope of winning the race...Delice
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Date: 7/18/2021 4:55:00 AM
Lovely write, Jan... Reads like a winner to me...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/18/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Supraja:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2021 1:43:00 AM
Well written Jan, you make the pantoum look easy, I steer clear lol. Tom
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/18/2021 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Tom it is a challenge but i love the form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/17/2021 10:19:00 PM
Brilliant!.All the best for contest
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Date: 7/17/2021 9:52:00 PM
Clever pantoum, I sincerely liked it. Best for a win. Hugs xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/18/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/17/2021 7:07:00 PM
Brilliant Jan, a wonderful Pantoum rhyme for the contest… Belle :-) x
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/18/2021 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Belle I hope Eve likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/17/2021 6:35:00 PM
Superb! A winner, me thinks! I think Eve will really like this one, Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/18/2021 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Milton i really enjoy writing this challenging form:-) hugs Jan xx