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He Does Love Me

in his cave he still loves me like an ostrich he thinks time conveniently freezes for his time out he takes time to recharge he’ll come back expecting I didn’t notice he was gone he’ll come back telling me and showing me that he truly does love me men really are from Mars Posted in March, 2018

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Date: 3/29/2018 12:23:00 PM
Lol! Delightful pen, that last line delivers the giggles :) xomo!
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Date: 3/29/2018 12:31:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Maureen. Very appreciated.
Date: 3/29/2018 10:03:00 AM
Hmmm :) nice poem well written! I have to learn a lot in poetry.
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thank you for your visit, Sakshi. Life is one big learning experience. LOL Line xx
Date: 3/29/2018 7:53:00 AM
I bet you will get a lot of corroboration with this, Line !!! Well said xxoo
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:15:00 AM
LOL Thanks for your sweet visit and comment, Mike.
Date: 3/29/2018 7:37:00 AM
Yes :)
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:15:00 AM
Sounds familiar?
Date: 3/29/2018 5:02:00 AM
Right! Right! E. X. A. C. T. L. Y. Right!!!
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:15:00 AM
LOL Caren. Does this strike a chord with you?
Date: 3/28/2018 10:07:00 PM
so much in so brief ... lovely ...
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Date: 3/28/2018 10:57:00 PM
Thanks, Probir, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

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