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He Does Love Me

in his cave
 he still loves me
 like an ostrich
 he thinks
 time
 conveniently
 freezes
 for his time out

 he takes time
 to recharge
 he’ll come back 
 expecting 
 I didn’t notice 
 he was gone

 he’ll come back
 telling me
 and
 showing me
 that he truly
 does love me

 men really are from Mars



Posted on March 28, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/29/2018 12:23:00 PM
Lol! Delightful pen, that last line delivers the giggles :) xomo!
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Date: 3/29/2018 12:31:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Maureen. Very appreciated.
Date: 3/29/2018 10:03:00 AM
Hmmm :) nice poem well written! I have to learn a lot in poetry.
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thank you for your visit, Sakshi. Life is one big learning experience. LOL Line xx
Date: 3/29/2018 7:53:00 AM
I bet you will get a lot of corroboration with this, Line !!! Well said xxoo
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:15:00 AM
LOL Thanks for your sweet visit and comment, Mike.
Date: 3/29/2018 7:37:00 AM
Yes :)
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:15:00 AM
Sounds familiar?
Date: 3/29/2018 5:02:00 AM
Right! Right! E. X. A. C. T. L. Y. Right!!!
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:15:00 AM
LOL Caren. Does this strike a chord with you?
Date: 3/28/2018 10:07:00 PM
so much in so brief ... lovely ...
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Date: 3/28/2018 10:57:00 PM
Thanks, Probir, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

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