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He Did Not Mince Words

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He Did Not Mince Words

He did not mince words with his news;
     his thoughts came forth like putrid ooze.
No need for him to paint the scene
     in sunshine yellow, hopeful green.

Sweet talk for us, he did not choose;
     he did not mince words with his news.
His thoughts direct and to the point...
     came like a bullet at gunpoint.

We sat there numb in our deep hurt
     unable to absorb, assert.
He did not mince words with his news;
     no way to misinterpret clues.

And there we were, the end was near
     for our sick mom, who was so dear.
The end was coming, were his views...
     He did not mince words with his news.


Sandra M. Haight

~7th Place~
Premiere Contest: Minced Words
Sponsor: John Lawless
Judged: 06/27/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/29/2016 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra, well expressed.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/29/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Richard. Sandra
Date: 6/29/2016 3:10:00 AM
Greetings Sandra. Congrats for your placement in the contest, with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/29/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Teddy. I appreciate your nice visits and uplifting comments. Sandra
Date: 6/27/2016 9:26:00 AM
Very moving, skillfully-written quatern, Sandra--will add to my favorites! Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/29/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice, for your lovely comments and congrats, and I feel honored that you have 'faved' my poem! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/27/2016 8:48:00 AM
Nice job with the Quatern Sandra. The repetition blends smoothly into the meaning and continuity of the poem. A lovely treatment of an horrific moment. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/27/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, John, for your contest with a thought-provoking theme. I am very pleased and honored to be on the list of your Premiere Contest. Sandra
Date: 6/22/2016 10:06:00 PM
You have knack of putting forth everything so softly, Sandra! Goid Luck!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/27/2016 8:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/19/2016 9:03:00 AM
Sad news to hear, but written very well:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/19/2016 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Jo. I appreciate your visit and positive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/18/2016 10:34:00 PM
An excellent write, though sad. I enjoyed listening to you reading your poem. Best wishes in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/19/2016 8:53:00 AM
Hi, Kim, thank you for your nice visit and lovely comments. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
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