He Deserved It

i kno this gurl
who got hurt very bad
i kno this guy
who has done somethings 
that hes gonna wish he never had
i am so angry now
so i have to go see, 
why he would do something so nasty
as i walk to his door
with my gun at my side
i sit there and think
as the tears roll down my face
how can he be so stupid?
now im gonna put him in his place 
my fingers are tembling
as i reach the door
the door bell is ringing
and the door cracks open more and more
i see his face
and i force myself in his place.
as i reach for my gun 
he reaches for his
i let out a shot
and i barely miss.
so i drop my gun
and i run straight for the man
as i punch him n kick
he starts to bleed when i take a last hit
then he looks me in the eyes
and grabs me by my throat
i scream with fear
as i start to choke
and he throws me on the floor
i reach for a knife
as i cut his leg
he grabs his gun so he can take my life
i beg n beg
as he turns around 
cause he heard a loud sound
i get up and stab him
and watch him fall to the ground
as i am watching him die
i begin to cry
and think about how he hurt her
and took her childhood
something she didnt think he would
now he cant hurt anyone else
cause i got rid of him
but for some reason i dont feel bad
that i put his life to an end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 5/18/2011 1:31:00 PM
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