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He Brightend My Day

It was a dark day, the sun went away. Ugliness came to play, I was robbed of my innocence! He came into my room, like a theif in the night, he did things , that just was'nt right. Whispering in my ear, everythings going to be okay, are words my mind would often replay! It was on that day, the sun went away. In darkness, I remained to play. To drugs i turned, to numb the pain. My life was over, never thought it would be the same. As it was before i was robbed, So on my knees, I fell, and gave it to God! I said if your real. then take this pain away. I gently heard , my father say, "Today is a brand new day" He helped me forgive, the one who took my innocence away!! Now on my knees, for him i pray. Today is truly a brand new day. God helped me, to make amends. God brought the sun back again. If i didnt mention, this was a divine intervention

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Date: 9/11/2010 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, trela
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Date: 9/10/2010 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest Trela. Love Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 2:25:00 PM
Congrats Trela on your HM in Catie's contest... a magnificent write and wonderful honor for u to enjoy tonight with luv..
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Date: 9/10/2010 12:48:00 PM
A beautiful tale. congrtulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:34:00 PM
great poem...sad, sad tragic story! should never happen.
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:14:00 PM
Awesome piece for the contest... good luck.. and a sore subject matter that u have enhance to create and relate to us to share... good luck have a safe and happy holiday weekend..with luv..
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Date: 9/2/2010 4:42:00 PM
That was realy good! I enjoyed reading it(:
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Date: 9/2/2010 4:03:00 PM
Nice poem, and a tribute to your faith. Excellent piece.
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Date: 9/2/2010 3:56:00 PM
My deepest sorrow goes out to you for what was done to you. ..I am glad that you met the one who loves and accepts and makes the person feel whole..Great write that is a great testimony of your faith..Sara
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