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He Leaves For the Leaves

HE     LEAVES   FOR   THE    LEAVES

Leave   work? Then I want to  be dazzled by  the  crop
Of fall trees  still in full leaf but about to drop
As if   loaded with   flames   yellow,and russet
That  ripple  thru  leaves ,  wind-fuelled,  sunlit .

The little flames are thrown to the river glass,
A hard fall, a  landing  ungainly, crass.
Unlike their graceful selves when branch-borne, 
They fall to the river, meet their reflections and mourn 
And  float ignominiously,  and collect their fellows
In untidy piles at the slack water shallows
Among the faded reeds and river weeds
Where ducks  scavenged,   lunched
But there are no longer swallows bunched.
A  fall from on high is filled with pathos
And  seeming  chaos.
End of beauty  air-light , and  the grief
I feel for each  fallen golden  leaf

Matches my joy   for the tree.  It  now survives the all-
Too- soon-but-not-quite- yet winter
And its killing cold.  And  produces another 
Dazzling flame-throwing show next fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/22/2010 6:25:00 PM
"Unlike their graceful selves when branch-borne, They fall to the river, meet their reflections and mourn/And float ignominiously, and collect their fellows/ In untidy piles at the slack water shallows" love these lines! (The extra odd spacing is distracting)"A fall from on high is filled with pathos And seeming chaos." add another line! Other than that I really really like the feel of it though if it were me i would regularize? the meter? Light & Love
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fantastic poetry with us Sydney. May your days always be filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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