Hazy

I found myself in Japan,
somewhere on a highwire-bridge,
balancing two feet in a haze.

More than two feet above the solid ground, way up high.
My eyes dart to and fro. Where I started from, I don’t know.
In a country, not my own. Travelling with eyes shut.

I’m with someone - my spouse?
In a dream with forgotten baggage,
it seems - do I remember this clearly?

Clearly not, as I’m told to roll over,
and by the way I pressed the snooze
button half an hour ago, or

I’d not progressed over that bridge without rails and eyes.
Somewhere in Japan - having no idea where I am.
I woke up thirty minutes later, back at home.

I roll out of bed, instead of onto my side,
pushing the sheets, pillows, my spouse
aside for the coffee cup, wondering why

I remember this dream where I left my feet and my eyes.
Is there really a bridge of this sort - how can I find it?
Where did I leave my baggage? Back at home with all my clothes?

Who needs more clothes when you are who knows where?
My mind seems topsy-turvy, as if I’m three sheets to the wind.
It is not a puzzle worth solving; stirring cream in coffee. The end.
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Date: 8/30/2025 6:56:00 PM
Hey, interesting, I have some dreams too and get confused in my sleep, lol.
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Date: 8/26/2025 7:10:00 PM
Hmm, I wonder if there's a message in that dream?!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2025 7:33:00 PM
I have never been to Japan. My husband has. A curious dream.
Date: 8/26/2025 4:12:00 PM
i tell you, lack of sleep brings me to a beta state where the foggy dreams become larger than life...and your exceptional poem does just that!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2025 7:36:00 PM
Thank you! Sounds like you understand. Perhaps, crazier dreams with age; or a different kind of crazy. Hugs
Date: 8/26/2025 3:24:00 AM
Darn, I hate being sick and cannot travel. I wish I can go to Texas and LA. and visit Kim too. But it is not to be.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2025 5:15:00 AM
Aww…and I’m so sorry that you are not well. Hugs from Georgia xx
Date: 8/25/2025 7:10:00 PM
I like the bang-bang way you ended this dream, Kim. And 'two feet above the ground' never felt so high. ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2025 5:14:00 AM
Thank you, dear Gershon!
Date: 8/25/2025 6:33:00 PM
original , i love dreams, never been in Japan, wake up must be strange, hazy is a good title
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2025 5:13:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/25/2025 5:46:00 PM
Hazy = a great title...your poem reminds of of the bizarre hazy dreams I have when I take some medicines...they just make me loopy. All that aside, this was a compelling poem. hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2025 6:21:00 PM
Who knows where these dreams come from ha ha! Hugs
Date: 8/25/2025 12:38:00 PM
Interesting read! Hazy! It must be in fall season at mountain peak in Japan :-) Have a nice day ~ hugs AA
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2025 6:21:00 PM
Crazy dream!
Date: 8/25/2025 11:10:00 AM
This is an interesting poem. I like the idea of travel, if only in one's mind.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2025 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda! :)
Date: 8/25/2025 11:03:00 AM
What a spin! Hope you win! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2025 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!
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