Haziness

There are things
I’d want to tell you
But they lie so deep
Under a haze of confusion
That it isn’t possible
To see them clearly
They are there perplexing
Yet not so mysterious
They whisper of the known
Of the unknown
They sigh of love
Caring and needing
Sometimes in a moment of stillness
I hear your name
On their every breath



Submitted on December 18, 2018 for contest END DECEMBER 2018 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

Submitted on March 12, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/20/2018 10:13:00 PM
Oh how our perspectives change over time. But I can see there has always been love in this poem. Great poem, great win.
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Date: 12/21/2018 5:16:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 12/20/2018 6:29:00 PM
Ah, those last three lines are precious: A clearing in the haze. Simply beautiful. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest with this gem. :) gw
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Date: 12/20/2018 8:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for your msost appreciated comment, Gershon.
Date: 3/12/2018 11:55:00 PM
This is beautiful Line,under a haze of confusion sometimes we all have that, so close yet so far.But we hear it in a moment of stillness....Maria
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Date: 3/13/2018 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Maria. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/12/2018 10:50:00 PM
This exudes mystery and appreciation. They whisper of the known of the unknown. Powerfully written.
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Date: 3/13/2018 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/12/2018 10:10:00 PM
Beautiful Line!!
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Robertina. Much appreciated.
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