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Hawk Rise predatory bird wing span built for upward soar circling more and more marking the unknowing kill mercy, if its prey stands still

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2016 8:00:00 PM

hey, a big congrats to you. WAY TO GO.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/26/2016 1:06:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2016 3:17:00 PM

Fabulous tanka Janis many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/24/2016 5:37:00 PM

Thank you Jan.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/24/2016 2:21:00 PM

I love hawks and eagles, this is beautiful Janis :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/24/2016 5:38:00 PM

Thanks, luloo.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/24/2016 11:10:00 AM

Title and poem are great! Congrats, Janis!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/24/2016 5:38:00 PM

Thanks.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/24/2016 10:30:00 AM

I can feel the journey your hawk up to that suspenseful moment of life or death through your well-chosen words in this Taka, Janis. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/24/2016 5:41:00 PM

I see the hawks everyday. They are like drones. Maybe that is what they are. it would not be a surprise.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 7:44:00 PM

Nice tanka, Janis. You must really like this bird!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/20/2016 9:26:00 PM

There are so many of them where I live and they fly over the woods so you can tell when an attack is near.