Haven of Hope

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20th September 2023 (Form: Seven-Ten)
Stymied by stygian thoughts On a moonless, murky night, Black is this chasm of soul's severe sorrow, Midnight hues paint their negative musings In somber shades of non-inspiring rhythms; Inky gloom pervades the mind, Bleak are the beats of darkness, Notions conceived at this hour are dreary, Transforming into tormenting nightmares, Nagging the heart with worries and unease; Drifting off to troubled sleep In soul-sick state suspended, Till the heart holds tight to Haven of Hope, Flooding the grim recesses with sunshine, A tentative smile plays on faith-filled face; A glimpse of glimmer appears, Shadows give way to rainbows, All's well with the world of woven wonders, The joy of The Lord strengthens my being, God-granted grace dispels dismal despair, Encompassed by Christ's true Love, Light shines through and I find rest.

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Date: 10/1/2023 8:25:00 AM
out of the darkness into light, so spiritual uplifting Jo:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:44:00 AM
Jo, this is quite beautiful my dear friend. A well-deserved win! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/30/2023 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Joanna! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Beautiful work, my friend, Emile.
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Date: 9/23/2023 12:47:00 PM
Truly my friend, this is an exceptionally beautiful new creation. It has the depths and powers that stirs a poet's heart and heaven seeking soul! A very fine gem and a new fav for me! God bless you.
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Date: 9/21/2023 2:18:00 AM
Your inspiration and spirituality deserve great praise. A poem to ponder on for our well-being. Blessings.
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Date: 9/20/2023 5:14:00 PM
I've never seen this form before, Jo, but you nailed it, my friend. You faced the challenges on your path of life and saw God's promise in the sky, opened your heart the Christ's strengthening, let God do battle for you, felt Christ's Love comforting you, and the Light gave you rest. A good way for all of us to live a life in Christ, Jo. Thanks for sharing in this interesting form of poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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