Have You Ever Dined With a Porcupine

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This is an add on monorhyme poem. If you have another stanza for me to add I will not only add it, but give you credit. Send it to me at SoupMail. This should be fun. Remember in a monorhyme, each verse rhymes. I have tried to keep it to 10 syllables per line.

Have you ever dined with a porcupine? I mean have had a meal, rather fine? Maybe not a dinner, but glass of wine? Did he prefer a soup spoon or a fork with tine? The reason I’m curious, please don’t wine… I’ve invited him to your house at a quarter to nine.

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Sandra Adams

Date: 6/28/2019 6:48:00 AM

This is so cute, it would make for a good child's poem! my muse doesn't often play in rhyme so i admire those poets that can :) hugs

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/2/2019 6:14:00 PM

well i suppose it's too late to decline but i hope he gets along with the swine he will be here at eight, so that is fine we will try to make his time here divine

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/28/2019 6:40:00 PM

Okay, Sandra, I guess you are not going to add anything. Okay. I get it. Some rhyme. Some don't. I like rhyme because of the "fun of it".

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2019 8:49:00 PM

Perhaps add this after the 6th/last line: 'I've got to get my house ready to shine' ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/27/2019 10:54:00 AM

Great. Where are your other three verses? I should have stated this. I would like 4 of them for a stanza. GREAT START!