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Have you ever tried choking? He asked nonchalantly. “No,” she said. *with a wrinkled nose of disapproval* “Want to try it?” *His approach couldn't hide his excitement* “Ok,” she said, absent mindedly running her index finger over his lips. “you can choke me,” she added slowly, “if I can stab you repeatedly with the 7 inch stainless steel nail-file I keep under my pillow.” . . Songs for this: Me and the Devil by Soap&Skin Better By Myself by Hey Violet

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Date: 6/7/2025 4:42:00 AM
<3 . Wow! SO evocative! Pregnant with such compelling possibilities. Could even be developed into a major motion picture! . . . This one's not 'quiet'. ;-) .
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Date: 6/7/2025 6:05:00 AM
choking may be having a moment. I thought I'd steak out a position. =]
Date: 6/6/2025 7:59:00 PM
Wow. Is that one battery operated too? =]
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Date: 6/6/2025 8:03:00 PM
Oh, Lithium-Polymer. You don’t want it to give out right when..

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