Have I Ever Told You That

Have I ever told you that …..
Scent of white gardenias rise
here, in my garden, the bush of gardenias
is in full bloom –

The roses and other blooming blossoms,
all dance in the cool breeze of early morning.
My garden is like a fresh maiden 
waiting to welcome her lover.
It is still dark outside.
I walk across the lawn, on wet grass;
I’ve never told him, that I talk to these little buds
musically and softly, each morning
and they nod their little stems, as I speak to them.
They listen to me -

 “You too look lovely, just like us” - they say;
Yeah, even graveyards have little gardens on their surfaces
smile I, uneasily;
underneath the charm smile,
hidden are the deep scars,
the bruises made by him
with words like stings.
I stop near the rose, touch its soft petals,
and the stem is full of thorns.
Do your thorns too, remind you of the rough times you had in the past?

I sigh to myself,
Have I ever told you that,
 if I too was spoken with a speck of kindness;
that I speak to you, dear Rose,
my face too, will be in full bloom 
just like my garden.

Contest 	:	Have I ever told you that ….. Poetry contest
Date		:	12 November 2020
Sponsored by	:	John Lawless

5th Place from the above contest

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Date: 11/21/2020 6:20:00 AM
you set the trap with beauty and kindness and then sprung the trap of loneliness and fear...all in a most creative metaphor. Well done Rasitha
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/21/2020 6:21:00 PM
Dear John, I'm amazed and happy about the way you read my poem. Happy to have a placement on your contest. Thank you. Rasitha
Date: 11/21/2020 5:33:00 AM
Beautifully penned Rasitha. Nice imagery. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/21/2020 6:22:00 PM
Linda, Thank you. Greatly appreciate your words. :) Rasitha
Date: 11/21/2020 2:00:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem, very descriptive and unique. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/21/2020 6:24:00 PM
Joanna, I am really happy that you enjoyed reading. Your word is a strength to me to keep writing. :)Rasitha
Date: 11/12/2020 7:02:00 PM
So vivid; so serene; so peaceful; and your piece touches the reader's heart! A winning poem in my list!!
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/13/2020 6:10:00 AM
Dear Newton Arach, Thank you for the generous comment.
Date: 11/12/2020 5:46:00 PM
So beautiful and well written Rasitha, kelli
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Date: 11/12/2020 6:26:00 PM
Dear Kelli, Thank you so much for your encouraging comment.
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