Haunting Fruit and Innocent Wish-2b

Continued from 2A


My mind drinks in the smorgasbord that lays before me

Baskets of mangos, papayas, apricots 

Red and green peppers

Nuts and dates in white porcelain covered metal bowls

Spices in see through plastic bags

A stone bowl with unusual markings holds Cayenne peppers 

I feel overwhelmed by all the sites and sounds

Not sure where I should rest my eyes

Fully alive yet blind to all that I cannot see


So I close my eyes 

allowing my heart to  s l o w  down

calm, quiet, present

becoming one with my now

In that moment from the corner on my eye

I see a poor woman with her child

Turning towards them 

I watch as she places a few coins in a vendors hands

He reaches under his counter for the lesser things

The not so pretty and less vibrant things

things that someone like me would toss away

These rotting things she places in her child’s hands

His need temporarily satiated

His is a look of thankfulness 

Her look is one of sadness and wishes

Still she wears her tattered robes with a noble bearing

Myself I feel my shoulders slump

my abundance weighing heavily

my selfishness 

my lack of need

my lack of awareness 

This willful ignorance

This emptiness

This decaying from within

So I walk towards them

Reaching into my leather bag

As I fumble for my bills I slip

falling flat upon the dusty ground

my white robes covered in dirt 

I am bankrupt in spirit and hands

Invisible except for too the eyes of a boy

This boy is now in a man’s body

He is wearing a white thawb

me I am a small child in tattered robes

bare feet, soiled face

clutching to rotting fruit

The noble woman grabs my hand

Saying “Come Come my son I have much to show you!”

The man in white looks at her and asks “Do I know you?

She says “I am no one...

He reaches into a leather bag and hands her a few bills

As he walks away, she whispers “ wishes do come true.



Note: this is the work of Richard Lamoureux on my request. I am thankful to him for helping me in giving life to the topic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/22/2018 3:39:00 PM
Just love the deep spirituality of this, the other-worldly feeling.
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Date: 3/9/2018 7:37:00 PM
Wonderful write you two, I love it...
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/15/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Charlie
Date: 3/8/2018 8:06:00 AM
Well it s a beautiful writte poem by both of you, I firstly read it on Richards page then knowing that it s a collaboration of both of you, I came to yours as well, glad to know that you help her,and you must be aware that in Pakistan wishes come true is the basic phrase of everyone you help, I live close to you by the way, about 2 hours drive away from in Bahawalpur but I m shifting to Lahore in May(after my CIE exams) for further studies
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/9/2018 6:23:00 PM
Hi Fraz thanks, it all owes to Richard. and i could not help her that is what it haunts me for ever. Nice to meet you are from Bahawalpur. i lived in Lahore for my studies and now i am in Dubai
Date: 3/6/2018 6:55:00 PM
A wonderful poem by both poets, I love both versions. Congratulations Muhammad, this is a fave for me....Maria
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/6/2018 11:33:00 PM
Thanks Maria...I am glad that you liked it and is in your favourite.
Date: 3/5/2018 1:52:00 PM
You are kind, thanks Muhammad!
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/5/2018 11:11:00 PM
Thank Richard
Date: 3/5/2018 6:34:00 AM
Richard is a great guy and I am glad he helped you.. You wrote a great poem..
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/5/2018 6:37:00 AM
Yes he is great and nice also....
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