Haunting Fears

Sauntering in the abyss of my museum of memories,
With all my true faces lurking in the grim of this gruesome silence.
Broken my pride is.
And broken was my life’s stance.
I look at the monolith as it patronizes the prelude to my cries.
Not so fortunate was I.
The clock ticks my breath away.
And even the illuminated opaque walls have something to say.
I close my eyes to the moon emanating an iridescence of memories flooding my face.
My vicious demons smile, victorious, as I struggle to leave the place.
As I get closer to the edge,
My vindictive heart forces to take a last look at the blood dripping from my fingers.
To take me away today they pledge.
Not frightened.
Not afraid of what it takes anymore.
And then I see your face.
And it all comes to a halt.
That awful pain and darkness fades.
I suddenly open my eyes to a blinding light from a small oval opening.
While finding myself over again in the delightful but annoying chirps, I stare at the ceiling dismayed.
Was that a nightmare?
Or the fear that one day you won’t care?

16/07/16
For contest: Make a poem*2 
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 7/28/2016 5:10:00 PM
many congrats Chandish - you are obviously a very accomplished writer. I couldn't even begin to start with the 21 words given to us for the challenge - very well done:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/28/2016 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations Chandish. What a nightmare and so much fear. And then the fear of a nightmare...
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Chandish Rk Daiboo
Date: 7/28/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thanks a lot.. Ahh yes, frightening indeed..
Date: 7/28/2016 7:37:00 AM
Congrats Chandish, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Chandish Rk Daiboo
Date: 7/28/2016 1:14:00 PM
Hey, thanks a lot.. First time I'm writing on Poetry Soup.. Glad they liked it.. Encouraging..
Date: 7/27/2016 11:30:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Chandish with this first entry to the soup...and a win! Keep it up. :)
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Chandish Rk Daiboo
Date: 7/28/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thanks ^^"
Date: 7/27/2016 10:05:00 PM
Congratulations Daiboo:)
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Chandish Rk Daiboo
Date: 7/28/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thanks a lot..
Date: 7/22/2016 10:44:00 PM
Wonderful use of 21 words! Keep it up Chandish. GL :)
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Chandish Rk Daiboo
Date: 7/28/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thanks a lot..
Date: 7/16/2016 4:19:00 PM
Awe, A contest, Chandish, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Chandish Rk Daiboo
Date: 7/17/2016 12:30:00 AM
Hi Skat. Thanks a lot for the encouragement. I'll do my best.
Date: 7/16/2016 10:12:00 AM
Chandish,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Chandish Rk Daiboo
Date: 7/17/2016 12:34:00 AM
Hey. For sure this will be a platform for me to learn a lot more and progress as a poet. I believe you're criticism will undoubtedly be helpful so you're most welcome to give me your opinion. I would love to read them. Thanks a lot. - Chandish
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